ummm hello?Quote:
Originally Posted by The Witness.
ummm hello?Quote:
Originally Posted by The Witness.
oh my bad witness i checked when u posted dat n he aint drop yet sry ima get a qwik voet n now
it's an OM..I posted the wrong link,but I changed it to the right oneQuote:
Originally Posted by Lil J.C.
o aight i dropped u a lil feed cuz i gotta go catch tha bus i was wonderin wtf happened lol peace o yea
FUCK CHICO!!!
Lol this was really corny man. That little intro just set eeeeeeeverything off on the complete wrong foot. Lol, this isnt audio man... When you have little settups like that than it just looks rediculously lame. I mean, I ddidn't even understand the purpose of this, who were you even dissing? *Shrug* I don't know, everything about this was wrong. The only elements that were good was the flow and structure. Everything else was just random and blah. Sorry guys, just wasn't feeling this piece at all.
I'd apreciate it if you could leave feedback on my new Om:
"When the Elephant Walks..."
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=287748
lol uppin for feed
uppin for feed
yo this piece was str8 trash..how could you guyseven think you did a decent job??i mean read your shit...its like you just started rapping and you freestyled...Learn to use multies and learn better wordplay and PUNCHES..Jesus..i hated reading all of it...if i was you i would learn how to atleast make up punches before writing ANYMORE OMS......05/10
This diss was wack as fuck...
i liked the rhyms 11 tims over though not 7 6 dude it has al the abiliy to realise it potential i dont think you realised the potenital
of the pieace LIK CAKE YOU NEED TO LAYER I THEN THINK IT THROUGH no like a pan cake
also make the font normal i had a hard time reading it yea so peace ma and keep reading the dictonarry l8ter