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well i wrote it because i had a friend who was 16 and she was going to have a baby but she couldnt afford to have her at the time so she had an abortion (which is the same thing as murdering a baby in my opinion) and so the whole thing was based on something that i saw happen about someone in my age group.....but thanx for the feed and i will do this over (revise) in a few....uppin
iight uppin yall...i want as much feed as possible
Liked it till the last bar.
Flow was hot.
Wordplay needs a lil work.
Liked the sreutcre.
Keep it up.
Hit up mu om please.
Yo this drop was real deep and very emotional. It was a good topic, flow was there, vocabs there, multies there, good structure. I give you a 10/10 keep it up lookin to see more
Not bad mate. It had feeling and i could feel that being conveyed. Good topic, different, but good. The only criticism that i have, is that the rhyming scheme is too simple. You gotta try and look at as many different words you can to rhyme with, not just the first one that comes along. But as I said, good drop. Big up yourself blood!!
iight thank you