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ANALYSIS
your not a real mc.. so lightweighted when i "punch" at you I feel tha breeze
this bitch is out of gas yall even his name says that this killas "E" (empty)
nice opener good
drill an squeeze every ounce of life out of you.. shit this herbs too wack
seriously I thought dr.seuss stopped rhyming till I heard you rap
nice but didnt quite pack punch
your rhymes are a piece of crap.. I mean they ~sound too bitch~
dude your fuckin verses are like constipation..
cause all your "forced drops" will never ~amount to shit~
lol that was a hott punch
you've got no concept of battling I mean this dude cant spawn strong types
he's so stupid his idea of throwing punchlines is flipping this juice stands on prom night
dont get it but good attempt
dont even recite cause dude your gonna get sparked
killa your lyrics are like retarded racers because their dumb from the start
lol hott closer good job
reality- nice verse man but work alot on ur delivery to ur punches cuz it looks like u had some but none made an effect cuz u didnt have a good delivery to those punches aight and work a little on vocab and structure everythin else is good and liked ur two punches that u hit mad hard so good job and work on that to elevate aight overall rate verse-7.0/10
U sayin that u callin me empty/
Cmon man REality check ur mom is havin my baby/
not good opener
Have u spinnin around like tha revolver 3 80/
Nigga talks alot of shit but i can take yo lady/
alright but simple
Son u should know im a pimp/
one shot in yo leg will make u walk wit a limp/
nah man nothin good
and u wont clap back cuz u a wimp/
ill make yo head blow up like if u were a blimp/
nah man again nothin good
Like yo name says u need to do it again/
Cuz tha RE is tha ality so ill come and hit u wit tha mack 10/
what man no sense
then ull be wishin why did i face him/
Son im tha boss like if i were thug slim/
whack closer man sucks
ke- nothin good here man not 2 be rude but u need alot of work homie work on flow structure punches and rhymes and dont use that closer ever again by switching slim thug to thug slim man that shows bad quality in u man u need alot of work to build that elevation aight but keep doin ya thing and ya mite get better i said mite aight overall verse rate- 2.0/10
v/ goes to reality cuz he brung it way better than ke he had better punches flow structure vocab and betta rhymes in total reality u mrked him good and demolished him in this battle but ke keep workin alot aight so my vote goes to reality for comin up with a way better vote aight