LLL Season XXIII - Chat/Predictions/Beef

Wtf did u link me to @knucklehead.

Hottest shit ever probably

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Originally Posted by Reef Flex

Wtf did u link me to @knucklehead.

Hottest shit ever probably

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it's one of barcs personalities that I put in a lab and altered

literally a monster

Sign in. ^ then.

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Originally Posted by Lay Doubt.

Like I said, pussy: produce a link to one verse you’ve written better than either of the ones from him/me.

Someone who’s as good as you talk like would have no issue with that. You’re a gimmick & a cornball. You aren’t about shit other than slobbering all over the next motherfucker’s scrotum. Weirdo.

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This was the SC finals last summer

http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=130291

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Originally Posted by JEM.

Sign in. ^ then.

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He won’t. That would mean actually shutting the fuck up & attempting a skill-based endeavor.

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Originally Posted by Blue Bayou

This was the SC finals last summer

http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=130291

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Stopped reading after that trash ass simpleton opener.

Not to interrupt what you guys got going, but if you can really rap bring yo ass over here http://disc.yourwebapps.com/Indices/195958.html#86942 need new blood if you barred up come prove it

Lmao, beef heavy here.

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Originally Posted by Lay Doubt.

Stopped reading after that trash ass simpleton opener.

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same thing I did with your verse against your father this week

Again... sign in or stfu.

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Originally Posted by knucklehead

Won last time cus ya shady, & now how u gettin killed is just dumb son
Go head & pull the skeletons out my closet, ya just making room to become one
yeah cuz we didn’t see that one coming lmao such a plot twist. trash.
This queers smacked. It's game time! vs. Sho? I'll never fear that
These two cans to ya head leave ya drinkin' out've straws like a beer hat
no, they won’t. run of the mill gun bar.
Had to cut the dreads off for time, but it was quick - neva weight or a homi
Next time someone catch a sentence when ya wig pushed back, I caught a body
worst one yet, absolutely awful.
Bout slaughter I'm passionate, gon get bloody when ya ass get kicked
U ain't just gettin' smoked, I'm finna bash ya fuckin' head in til I can ash in it
finally a good line, congrats you’re 25% so far.
U won't be remembered. No tears when 44 44s hit what ya ride in
You ain't ever get Cred, you just got ur whole style stolen & elevated by him
oh damn how unpredictable. this exact style of punch has been done 64826359 times. insert random battler name in place of “Cred” and bingo. cookie cutter & boring as fuck.
Cupids aim, this AR got me feelin' the love when the lead blow
One ring'll put ya on ya knees & then ruin ya life like she said no
must have really brainstormed it up to think of this concept lol garbage
Rip ya heart out mid dinner, carve ya chest til ya dead on site
Have him at the table with some free space in the middle like bingo night
decent concept but worded/executed terribly. you couldn’t come up with a multisyllabic rhyme here? It’s sight* btw
Ya girl is all over the place,cot damn that whore is drama
Have her jumpin' on every single piece of furniture like the floor is lava
what a profound analogy & ferocious insult to your opponent. are you serious? this shit isn’t even a punch. like the floor is lava lmao are you 8??
Snitch ass faggot, I don't need to sing so don't test me
When I pull the plug it's death, when u pull the plug ya got out early for the SC
not quite, sport
Price on ya head - step in my city & a shadow on ya, so come 'round
Leave a body on the ground with these long arms like it's sunrise or sundown
hey look another boring ass gun bar that a 5th grader could have came up with. embarrassing way to close a verse.

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You’re talking shit to me when you write verses like THIS? Lmao that’s wild. Shit was not good. Smoked/ash & bingo night were the only two lines that didn’t completely suck ass. MAYBE beer hat if you’re into gun bars. Everything else was bad.

The point is most of this text shit is trash, start writing ur bars to spit out loud without it being corny stretched or forced. We all got room to improve and we let a small few tell us what’s hot or acceptable. Make shit more inclusive and watch this shit grow.

Some people jealous when they c others doing something positive or just having fun, cause their own life ain’t matching up

But nuff real talk I got some real action behind it

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Originally Posted by Lay Doubt.

You’re talking shit to me when you write verses like THIS? Lmao that’s wild. Shit was not good. Smoked/ash & bingo night were the only two lines that didn’t completely suck ass. MAYBE beer hat if you’re into gun bars. Everything else was bad.

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you gotta have 0 going on with your life to breakdown a verse with the intent to hate on it to such an unbelievably bitter level lmaoooo

that verse won the biggest tourney of last year, between either site, so i'll take the results instead of some has-been that ever thought lay doubt was inventive enough to justify using it as a username's opinion on anything

God damn Bags man... I was robbed, wished we got to battle

Rereading the feedback in the votes is a fuckingggg jokee buds


that Shadow/body on the ground/long arms/sunrise bar was dope tho

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Originally Posted by knucklehead.

you gotta have 0 going on with your life to breakdown a verse with the intent to hate on it to such an unbelievably bitter level lmaoooo

that verse won the biggest tourney of last year, between either site, so i'll take the results instead of some has-been that ever thought lay doubt was inventive enough to justify using it as a username's opinion on anything

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“0 going on with your life” says the clown who literally logs on to talk shit about battles/people in a league that he’s not even a participant in lmao the irony is rich as fuck. Like I said, you’re a certified cornball there’s no way around it.

I don’t care what that verse won you scrub. It only has to beat one person so congrats on lucking out by your opponent somehow posting some worse garbage than that.

I can read the shit with my own eyes & say with certainty that my shit this week AND barc’s are both decidedly higher quality & more advanced text verses. Conceptually, wording, set ups & tie-ins, rhyme scheme, execution, punch development. Literally by every measure yours is a lower grade of writing.

You just came up in a league you don’t even battle in to pop off bout some dumb shit & got decimated for it. Congrats.

decimated by who? you?

lmao this lonely faggot delusional

must be having a mental breakdown similar to the one where he thought lay doubt was an advanced wordplay hahah