Nothing wrong w/ similes. As long as they aren't simple
I'll spread ya blood like butter on toast...
^^^ that shit'll get you ether'd of the site
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Nothing wrong w/ similes. As long as they aren't simple
I'll spread ya blood like butter on toast...
^^^ that shit'll get you ether'd of the site
Yeah
Muff hit me up on nc bro can pm on here yet
Lotto, go check in to the 1-2. Im bout to post
I'm pretty sure you're a non factor until maybe a few weeks down the line.Quote:
Originally Posted by MUFF the Monolith
so lmao
Niggas been lettin shots off for the last couple days lol. This what the season needs
Not 100 percent greek king
A mutt chick who was blk n greek though
So that.dsmt count
She was bad af tho.
Why?
Or bite their structure.Quote:
Originally Posted by King Soul
I'll give three different types of ways at how to set up a DECENT "Set Up" & "Punchline".
This first one is more friendly to you, being a topical lyricist that is use to this formation of syllables.
1st: The Multi/Multi-syllabic bar
You use imagery as a device against the opponent, make 'em look how you want 'em to look.Quote:
She'll sky dive in gator shoes; ride in high tides with skater dudes
Plus her gun's an animal with hella KICK -- pulling drive bys on kangaroos
Then you close it out with a PUNCH, that's focused on some decent PLAY ON WORDS. "
A play on words, not to be confused with actual wordplay, is the intertwined usage of words in your bar
"gun's an animal" meaning it wrecks shit
"with hella kick" that's the recoil of the aeformentioned guy, but it also has emphasis on meaning something else
"pulling drive bys on kangaroos" <--- this is where the "animal" and "hella kick" come to a conclusion, and are brought to relevance.
2: The Wordplay bar
Wordplay bars need your topical skills to come in for 2 reasons.Quote:
Leave u permanently tanned, when i raise this 50, ya done..
When shots from the Calcutta nigga, they burn like rays of the Indian sun
The set up needs to paint the scenery for whatever shit you about to spit.
"permanently tanned, when i raise this 50" You can tell this is LITERALLY going to be a "hot" bar
The punch needs to paint a clear connection between one word or phrase and another word or phrase.
"shots from the Calcutta nigga" Usually if somebody talk about a "Cal" they speaking on a gun's diameter fitting a .9, .22, .45 or .50 Caliber. The wordplay here is "Cal cut a nigga"
which is pretty clean considering most bars have awkward or "FORCED" wordplay measure. An example of Forced Wordplay is when I did a "Sheila/She'll" bar last week and the "a" at the end of Sheila made the shit forced and not in sync.
3. The Bidirectional Bar
This one is simple and something you should focus on to build yourself up.Quote:
Ur a females last option, ya weak game will snooze her
A chick MIGHT consider fuckin Killing....herself before she would date this loser
It's a simple set-up, with a misdirection of meaning in the punch.
"A chick MIGHT consider fuckin Killing"
"....."
"herself before she would date this loser"
It's like holding a basketball out in front of ya homeboy and just as he about to grab it, you snatch the shit away from him.
It creates a certain level of surprise.
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Once you master a couple forms out of here, you'll find yourself needing to combine multis, misdirections, play on words and wordplay all in one bar. That's your ultimate challenge as a lyricist.
But your ultimate goal is creativity.
LENOX to thread ^^
Ur just scratching the surface
But infotmative for some i.imagine
Nice post og
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Kangaroo drive bys was a lil silly tho. I get thr concepy w/ the kick shit
But yhe phrase druve by on kangaroos is like ehhhhhhh no offense
Sounds corny
@Odd Ways
Watup bossman
U in a crew on nc?
No sirQuote:
Originally Posted by joog'n
I know broQuote:
Originally Posted by MUFF the Monolith
On the topical tip? I'm an A-List lyricist, easily when I'm inspired and in my game.
I can compete with Black, Witty, them niggas that mod over at NC, Rhetoric over at RR too.
And I know I'm young, so I got time to perfect the craft
The process is like this.
First part is that I get lazy, which prevents me from being dope half the time
Emily was easy pickings, so all them concepts "Em/D-12" could have been HOT if worded better but I just ain't care. should have tho.
The second part is that I'm more of a rookie/sophmore when it comes to text so I'll put up a great jab or a solid punch, just for 4 people to love the shit but the other 7 might be 'veterans' so they'll have heard it.
This shit is trial and error for me right now.
And once I'm on track, I don't see a threat. Just finding that track is the current issue.
G/l
How old are u tho. Curious
Don't worry about that, right now.Quote:
Originally Posted by MUFF the Monolith
Just know this pen game last forever nigga
I mean u talkin as if u a lil boy like lenox
On.some ima lil teacup shit. So i asked iono
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Nigga u my age btw
I can tell
I know broQuote:
Originally Posted by MUFF the Monolith
On the topical tip? I'm an A-List lyricist, easily when I'm inspired and in my game.
I can compete with Black, Witty, them niggas that mod over at NC, Rhetoric over at RR too.
And I know I'm young, so I got time to perfect the craft
The process is like this.
First part is that I get lazy, which prevents me from being dope half the time
Emily was easy pickings, so all them concepts "Em/D-12" could have been HOT if worded better but I just ain't care. should have tho.
The second part is that I'm more of a rookie/sophmore when it comes to text so I'll put up a great jab or a solid punch, just for 4 people to love the shit but the other 7 might be 'veterans' so they'll have heard it.
This shit is trial and error for me right now.
And once I'm on track, I don't see a threat. Just finding that track is the current issue.
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Don't know why my browser keeps double posting lately.
I was trying to reply to Letterman. Can't even delete it either smh.
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Nah, but some of y'all been here since '05. Talking on some Dagel I-been-here-for-a-decade type shit.Quote:
Originally Posted by MUFF the Monolith
We talking about my 2nd year and I be on and off as far as activity go.
Muff manolith is 36?
Ive taken years off
U think i texted everyday every yr for 15 years?
Lol no.
I just started very very young
Like younger than lenox young
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1~1~1987
Pherno
You're older. lol
muff a year older than me
Bktch u look 65 tho
Lol. And i.never seen u. Idc u fkn.geezer
Bwaha
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To og wrinkle face
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Ks one day we gon chill n smoke sum loud
Im.jus gon.pop.up.on.u
Lol im.on.mu.phone. I cant type withkut lookin retarded
bruh...u look like a wookied got his forehead smooshed into his chin by a sledge hammer.Quote:
Originally Posted by MUFF the Monolith
wrinkles stay holding dirt, every morning you wake up the sand in ur bed makes u think u were at the beach
plus your german and do weird things
Just read itQuote:
Originally Posted by Odd Ways
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Kno this nigga aint talkin
Odoyle Rules! Lookin ass nigga
Bitch u look like Spanky from lil rascals all grown.up. Fkn he mans woman hater club ass nigga
???
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Talkin shjt to ks
Aka brad pitstain
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Thats why ima wet mouth ur blunt up ks
Quote:
Originally Posted by MUFF the Monolith
are u kidding? son u ACTUALLy look like spanky painted brown. and we all know about the last time u got laid....non existent u whoopie goldberg son wit short hair eating pickles bitch
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u get those semen suckers awayQuote:
Originally Posted by MUFF the Monolith
whoopee Goldberg son?
OK NOW IM MAD
HOW DARE UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
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I got a dollar
I got a dollar
I got a dollar HEY HEY HEY HEY!
fuk u bitch. u muscle milk headed freddy kruger shirt wearing fucking JJ Kilowatt looking ass BIIIIIIITCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
sup
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nigga look like brock lesnar if he was a frail faggot
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nigga look like brock lesnar if he was a frail faggot
lmao.
ok these jokes suck big deek I give up
Sup tho Muff...Its been a minute
sup w/ it man
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glad to see u back
Shit you know workin hard...Glad you stayed over here...RB could use the talent
Wtf
wtf wtf
yeh. I had to leave you know where.
too much bullshit. I could write a novel on all the fuckery
niggas paying Baron mynd to contact my mom n shit. posting my dads fb pics when he was recovering from a heart attack n shit
biters getting free passes because their friends w/ people who run shit. so much faggotry. I decided to step away and compete w/ having to fuk w/ clowns. tbh
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w/out fucking w/ clowns
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oh and that onetime I had like 200 bars saved in pms...and hush hacked my account...gave it to bags...then bags posted my stockpile in discussion
lmao gay shit like that
^^^Damn I didn't know it was that real.....Fuck that shit....I was just sick of the level of childishness over there...I mean shit talking is one thing, but that trolling mixed with all the favoritism is booty. I still got people over there for sure...But smh at the majority
who?Quote:
Originally Posted by MUFF the Monolith
Air these niggas out
Who?
Y'all talking bout Netcees members probably, cause Baron Mynd left here & stayed there.