LLL Prime - The Revival: Season 1 Chat

RAO the sauce boss can do as he pleases.

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Originally Posted by Lay Doubt.

It can be enlightening to have the insight of what specifically could be tweaked or adjusted within a concept/punch/bar, in order to improve it and have one’s writing go over better with readers/voters in the future.

The point of that (at least imo) vote/breakdown style has historically been to assist with elevation. Generally speaking, battlers wouldn’t know what to improve upon or how to do it unless they were given real feedback on the bad lines along with the good.

It might be kinda moot here in 2025, when text battling as a space/realm isn’t what it once was or whatever. But I still think it’s a good thing to not be lazy with votes. I personally will try to be more constructive and less harsh sounding when I vote on everything this week. If anyone gives a shit lol.

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i care, also props to u for pm'ing/discussing w me about stuff in a normal manner and caring. trust me, the other few ppl i tried to PM did NOT want to discuss it LMAOOOO

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Here's some more ammo on me lol

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Originally Posted by Lay Doubt.

It can be enlightening to have the insight of what specifically could be tweaked or adjusted within a concept/punch/bar, in order to improve it and have one’s writing go over better with readers/voters in the future.

The point of that (at least imo) vote/breakdown style has historically been to assist with elevation. Generally speaking, battlers wouldn’t know what to improve upon or how to do it unless they were given real feedback on the bad lines along with the good.

It might be kinda moot here in 2025, when text battling as a space/realm isn’t what it once was or whatever. But I still think it’s a good thing to not be lazy with votes. I personally will try to be more constructive and less harsh sounding when I vote on everything this week. If anyone gives a shit lol.

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I feel like thats fair, I sometimes see my own flaws after I submit my lines on how one word or punctuation could have made it resonate better with what I was going for...but also I know my writing style isn't for everybody so the feedback I get I take, but I also don't try to cater to too much to the criticism of my lines because that would take away the uniqueness of each person battling shit would get stale fast as hell. I think in the past a lot of votes used to be done before the battle started, don't really see that going on anymore so that's refreshing.

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Originally Posted by Axe.

I got a question for you bro generally curious. How does Good Year, tread lightly, shredded, and reTIRE not equal a concept in your book? Was meaning to ask you that but was waiting for the battle to be closed

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It was certainly a concept, just not a good one

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Originally Posted by Baron Mynd

It was certainly a concept, just not a good one

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??? You in the league?

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Originally Posted by Baron Mynd

It was certainly a concept, just not a good one

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Respect my new buddy Axe murderer.

We rep Firestone and hankook round ere.