My Vote is for Ace.
BUT
You have to structure your verse better. Even it was good lyrics and shit, you could lose a vote because someone might find it hard to read. Set it up like Blend did in his verse. None of that paragraph shit.
Vote = Ace.
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My Vote is for Ace.
BUT
You have to structure your verse better. Even it was good lyrics and shit, you could lose a vote because someone might find it hard to read. Set it up like Blend did in his verse. None of that paragraph shit.
Vote = Ace.
opener: ace
closer: ace
punches: ace
structure: blend
wordplay: tie
vocab: tie
overall ace
aiight not a bad battle, but blend you need to elevate a lil bit, and so does the other guy, an fix his structure
PLZ DrOP AN HONEST VOTE ON THIS SEEMING AS I HAVE TOOKEN TIME T0 V0TE OM Y0URS
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=99299
ace took it when he said
keep your pants zipped up with your little weiner/when yo girl said it's smaller than 2 centimeters/
that was nice
but the other dood hard two when he said
bust rhymes all up in ya like bullets smoking out the gun,
When im up against your ass i do this shit for fun
so if i could vote it would go to ace
this battle was kinda weak but i think Blend came a little harder than Ace............................................... ......................he didn't win by much though
ace king loses for uppin to much. follow the rules hoe $$$$$$$$$######################################### ############################################