and the lord sayith: Go Out and Distroy(GOD) (completed 12 track ep)

wow...your the first person to compair to eyedea who is one of idols so thank you...rhyme sayers is the shit...thanks for the feed..the next CD will be done in a month or so...its called "sorry!Gone Out Drinking" or GOD....ill take all Feed from this thred into consideration while doing so...unless its retarded
uppen

ok im listening to track 4..man i hate this beat
you remind me of split a lil, i dunno i think you picked the wrong beat..vocals a lil low..no doubt your lyrics are nice..have alot of meaning to them..i think your flow is a lil fast for the beat..maybe its just me but...
overall.. its not my type of music at all. but if its you n shit..good work

thx for feeding my shit man

yo man thats a skit not a song...but thanks for the feed......that beat was a joke i did on purpose....but thx anyway

uppen

that song wont be on the cd as of 6 o clock today..

that is the only song i skip when i listen to this cd..

and i dont want to have one of those cds

w e ne ed some ne w feed back hur

well..flow was pretty good...lyrics are on point...i was really throwed off by the beat..wasnt feeln your beat of choice with a lil old school drums and sum scary samps..but delivery is there..and it was not bad..keep it up..

k I peeped "god is dead".....wow this beat is SUPER amatuer.....ok u trying the fast flow but u stumbling over alot of syllables...it sounds sloppy...def not feeling your voice...its really nasally but I wont hold it against u, on verse 2 it sounds like u trying really hard to mimic aesop rock...lyrically u had simplistic metaphors, but u had metas so that counts for something....the hook is terrible man....u needed a melody or something to make it catchy....awww outro is bad man u shoulda jus echoed the "god god is dead" instead of saying it over an over that was beyond annoying....all in all I can respect your religion focused EP but this song needs alot of polishing.

second verse wasnt me...but thanks for the feedback...the chorus was originaly going to be trent rezner from NIN singing GOD is dead but i didnt want to use anymore songs without permision so we did it ourselfs...
ill take the feedback into concideration on the next CD...thanks for the feed

uppen

this is very different not bad just different raps skills are shown so fix the sound and u straight

this cd sucks...ass...

i wouldnt pay 50 cents for this shit...
you should just quit tyrying to rap so you stop making yourself look stoopid


and whats with those terrible beats and lame ass production...

quit now and save yourself the trouble

what the fuck...shut up scott....idk why u'd say that but w/e

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Originally Posted by Ss...Ssulivan11

this cd sucks...ass...

i wouldnt pay 50 cents for this shit...
you should just quit tyrying to rap so you stop making yourself look stoopid


and whats with those terrible beats and lame ass production...

quit now and save yourself the trouble

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Real Talk

your still a hater syndicate and its funny thats how u responded....

syndicate yu are such a fukin NERD......you sit at your computer rating others peoplz songz as shit, talkin shit yet i cant even find one song oyu have done...

why dont you get a life and stop waiting to cause fueds on a fukin rap forum.... fukin NERDS..

track 1.....

horrid beat......

clean the flow up a lot...you sacrafice it too much....nobody is gonna be drawn in if 2/3rds of the song isnt on beat...gotta EQ and compress a lil bit better......clean the vocals up...most of it sounds like your on a phone....or talking through a tin can....