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new to the board so my vote probably don't count but definetely feeling the topic
Baron-simple structure less metaphors with more direct adjectives, felt more like a battle piece at points. kinda lost my interest half way thru but still a decent piece
Xplicit- more of a poetic structure definetely more on point topically. feeling your style overall. some lines were so visually mind enlightening i had to re-read it. that's how i know a good piece.
V-Xplicit
LiQuiD MeTaL
Need 2 BATTLE.....no need 2 prove nothin no newbs apply....some1 with skill PLZ!!!
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6-3...thanks for the votes.
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baron nice piece not your strongest from what i am used to but it really does work for your you came simple straight to the point with the story and topic and hand which is a good thing X same with you i felt a poetic vibe from your piece which showed the emotion in it i liked how you used imagrey also to show what was up a good thing also.
so i have it a draw what i like in both but i really do have to vote someone so
vote......Baron
just had a better verse that entertained me
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Big Tim in the house house...7-3.
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Closed...Baron will be unable to show next week, so the championship match will be determined by the next two in line besides the two whom just battled...when Baron returns...he will get a shot when he asks for it...whether it be by ranks or if he wants to be added for a 3 way topical champ match
