the flow was pretty tight it was the best part for all of you's, but you guyz need to throw in multies and get more complex wit some 2 or 3 or more syllable rhyming
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the flow was pretty tight it was the best part for all of you's, but you guyz need to throw in multies and get more complex wit some 2 or 3 or more syllable rhyming
nice work there was emotion and good drops from all 3 of you but like dap c said the peice lacks multis
leave feed on perspectives of a soldier plz
good peice. nice flow throughout from all verses....
overall this was cool i liked it...
toopic was cool...overall i say diss was a 8.5/10
good job guys.
yo sorry for my shorter reply. my other just disspeapeared. b in general i say this was a decent joint. i thought blue verse was best. had more multies . and went deeper w the concept and emotion
red verse was decent . but needed sum more complex rhymes n flows.
black verse was good in many aspects. i'd say more internals or multies would spice up the flo f'sho. and verse cudda ended better on the real
all in all ya'll gelled pretty well 2gether. kepp em poppin
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