average topic, but you put some spice into this, u had nice flow and good wordplay......u came good with this piece
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average topic, but you put some spice into this, u had nice flow and good wordplay......u came good with this piece
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this was quite good,I was feeling the emotion in this peice,it was a very good part of your drop.I liked your structure it made the peice easy to read and your rhyming and wording was quite good too.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...49#post4528449
leave feed in that