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Bored Nah Mean, Cant Talk In Here Though Case They Close It For 2 Many Ups,1
please stop suckin her puss. the piece wasn't that good. no hatinQuote:
Originally Posted by CypherSoreEyez.
Well if he think its that good then its his opinion but keep doin ya thing tori
alright,coming from someone who has won no battles.but um if youre not going to leave real feedback,please dont bother posting in hereQuote:
Originally Posted by S.N.I.C
thanx
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Originally Posted by S.N.I.C
damn, i mus have a trans- atlantic tounge,
meh, its cyph's alias,
sometimes I'm busy posting and have no time for front lines.
dopest lines >"Tora....baby girl don't be mad at me
all i ever wanted was for you to be proud of me thats the best part
ight uppin for more feed,n no bullshyt feed either.experienced people that know what they are talking about,thanx
this was shiity learn how
to rap
nigga
ok another gay response ^.i specifically said for no one with no amount of experience to leave any type of feed in here.
no bullshyt freeposting either.thank you
This peice was ok you know.? Nothing that was to great. The structre was off a tad bit. And the wordpaly was lil young. the plot was nice and the flow was incredible. 6-10 peice. Keep it up.
aight thanx for the honesty^.uppin
feedback,please n thank you
This piece was written to perfection....It flowed well vocab was cool but could've used a few differnt words instead of the same rhyme scheme but it all came together at the end. I felt where you were coming from visualing a ladies point of view on male judgement and I have to say you did't do that bad capturing the male point of view..
Overall this was a good piece for the readers ear....Keep Up the HOT DROPS...
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