Enough....

rise...

I've done all i could do to make this work...Gave myself over and over
She wants her perfect life..and doesnt care who she has to steps over

theres the two lines that had the same ending word....

anyways...i liked this...im not that good with feedback..either i like it or i dont...and i liked this...keep it up.

nice rhymes and multies man....those were pretty tight.....
flow was pretty smooth throughout this whole peice....
topic was aight i guess....after i read it i got why it was called that
and that the topic became good....vocab was decent..
not all dat complex...imagery was aight as well....
overall diss was pretty good....keep it up..peace~

Rise...Leave links...

^^^like i said before..:bored:....

I will leave feed on left links