nice work king :P nice topic good flow and overall not much to say except nice work lol :)
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nice work king :P nice topic good flow and overall not much to say except nice work lol :)
he knows I could never stand up to him, but it’s getting very tempting
his actions have left my life, my mind, and now even my soul empty
the scars on my body, are just superficial, it’s inside that’s really scarred
I am the most insecure person alive, but on the outside I try to look hard
fav part there^
Flow:::: very good i was impressed cuz ur flow was nice an smooth for liketha whole om it didnt really fall off
vocab::: really good u had some nice wording in this it was deff 1 of tha best this month
wordplay:::really good i was so impressed by this to u had nice wordplay all thru an nice real nice rhyming
Topic:: i luved tha topic an u stayed on it all tha way it was real dope this piece should be nominated for HOF jus real dopeness