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tks for the pointers Pak i understand it now ok tks Fam...

Aight now uppin this'

ya this was nice very easy to follow along with and good wordplay...........keep up the good work

Thanks preciate it

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ok this was overall a good piece u stayed on topic flow was smooth but it did go off wordplay was real good i am happy i didnt waste my time rteading this cuz this om could win u a HOF

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Originally Posted by Reflexion

ok this was overall a good piece u stayed on topic flow was smooth but it did go off wordplay was real good i am happy i didnt waste my time rteading this cuz this om could win u a HOF

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lol, only way i can win OMHOF is if dogs nominate this piece, anyway preciate ya comments thanks

Aight, uppinn this once again

dope stuff :) ....................keep it up

Yeah thanks