aiite thanx desiree & fire gurl... feed appriciated..... stay up laydeez!.....1
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aiite thanx desiree & fire gurl... feed appriciated..... stay up laydeez!.....1
basically even though I'm doin 1 of those annoyin things but this is whats right^^Quote:
Originally Posted by big j da fat boy
naw u cool hun..^^^ *thumbs up*
It was iight.Work on your imagery a bit more.Try to create a better picture for the person thats reason and you some better vocab.It wasnt a bad piece though it was iight.There were a few nice lines in there that I felt but ya need more emotion in it.I seen you do better to.Make your verse look better with differant fontsw too.Keep it up.Peace....
aiite cool dyl i get cha... i was gonna check out ya battle 2 but it already clozed..
thanx for the feed dow hun.......1
no prob babe
cool... niice rec dow... *thumbs up*
it sound like you just had enough of the D/R and the B.S. feed sothats what im gonna do...peace...
Just kidding
it sounded like you were talkin bout some on directly...i didnt expect a verse like that from the title i was thinking of a seat belt for some reason...i dont know...but it was a good verse i've seen better from others and frome you...but overall it made it point dont leave shit feed...
Rep DLL Baby... and stay up...
lol @ GR... aiite thanx.. this pretty wack i kno... it was deffo 2 the d/r's etc.. nuttin major jus gettin my point across... but thanx for leavin feed.......