This was a pretty good read. Vocab and flow were great and the imagery was definately there. Wordplay was decent as well. This was simple yet affective.
Feed for the OM in my sig would be appreciated.
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This was a pretty good read. Vocab and flow were great and the imagery was definately there. Wordplay was decent as well. This was simple yet affective.
Feed for the OM in my sig would be appreciated.
shit was deep!!! i really feltwant u was sayin
good wordplay
keep it up son!
up fo feed
i think that shit was tight it wasnt that the rhymes where out of hand but im a sucker for a dope story and the way you leave people to use their imagination is sick as hell keep it up homy