thanx for tha feed diamond mine
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thanx for tha feed diamond mine
yeah nice poetic pieces from both yo.. the lay out and delivery was nice...excelent wording and cool imagery... vocab was str8...story ran well...easy to read...
had some good rhymes throughout fosho...
topic/concepts was carried well..so yeah an illish piece
stay1
lol I think u gave feed on dis twice vortex, but thanx again LOL
a y0o none of u cats can compare 2 me.... all u can do isz just stare at mee... cause tha ice make ur eyes wearyy... its s0o0o cold when u walk around u need 2 wear a northface near me....and my punchsz hit ur chest so u stuggle when u need 2 breath// deceased so ur body'sz underground like "need for Speed".... I luv Rippin catsz(no homo) and strippin catsz(no homo) takeing there chain livin like jonez from tha diplomatsz...livin a stupid life wyt advantages... every1 knoes that my fist damages... kidsz cant handle it when i come through... they all like 2 talk sayin fuck u.... when shyt gets tha poppin u no whut they doo.... run for there life sayin im sorry i luv u... These fuckin homo'sz cant cop my shyt... and none of these homo's can rock my shyt... i throw on sum crispy jeansz and a white tee.. a fitted hat thatsz crack my dub'z in light green... and even sumtimesz i got the whole bape'sz outfit... i go 2 tha cheapest place the 28th street outlite... E-Zz geTt at itT... InDepeEndEnt RighTT nowW do00oin it bigg WUnNnn DIPSETT!!!
WTF at that^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^Lmao
Anyways I thought the shit was dopeness liked
Both verses both stayed on Topic real well
Complexity was deep had deep emotions and heart
Imagery was really nice off top,Nice structure
Nice flow/Rhyme scheme carried well
Vivid metahors,Very enjoyable read
Laid out very intelligently
All together Nice piece from both of you
Keep spittin,Stay up 100
Shawty, your mind is full of beautiful images and ideas.
You let it flow here with immense amount of emotion, and tons of imagery.
It worked out perfectly even though your flow was a little choppy.
Grim yours followed up real nice to Shawty's piece, you kept it all goin'
and together you's made a real nice piece.
Keep Up, For Sure.
werdd thats whadsz upp.... but i know i need work jus gunna get better in tha end
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