b_rEEz Vs. DAMN!!!

yea well you sure dont leave no decnt feedback unless its you r homie do you you bullshittin foo.. plus you only vote for your homies..your votes are bullshit bitch..

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Originally Posted by b_rEEz

listenin to ya rhymes, is like watchin me take a shit
you producin flow, but you could never make a hit

[hmm... i dunno about this]
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im tryna pay attention, but DAMN!!! homie you suck
if you cant win with skill, you sure as hell cant with luck

[true true... i liek this one]

you flows like a hydrant, but its bein cut off
my flow is amazing, suck ya in like a trough

[not too shabby, but, I woul dnot suck any trough persoanlly]

DAMN!!! im choppin you up, and its to perfection
im stealin this battle, like i do an interception

[good play witht he wrods here I like this]

you jus jail bait, you always bendin over for soap
n you a freestyle battler, who jus got no hope

[ouch, that is why you get taht shit on a rope (literally no rhym eintended)]

ya grabbin the rope, but homie ya grips to weak
.....hold on a minute....i gotta take a leak.......
................................................OK

[hestiation, I am not feeling that sorry]

Im back, n i realized my penis produces a better flow
cuz at least when im pissin, people like the show

[lol realy]

you a wack MC, you more like a toy puppet
no one votin ya battles, you keep tellin'em to Upp it

[ that ahappens to me.... LOL]
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you that tv channel, that nobody really like to watch
HOMIE, IM UP HERE, could ya stop starin at my crotch..

[that woul dbe a boring show, but good line]





Blah..whatever..weak...and quick.....

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hands down he B REEZ takes it, i like his better in every way.

i think damm took this cat...yall think reez got him..
thats a joke..he had no creativty or nothing...i vote damm

Opener=breez, both was week, but that crazy glue vegatables line
naawwww....lmao not in a gud way
Rhyme scheme=damn, elevated scheme, breez to simple
Flo=tie, both had some sharp transitions,
Vocab=none really, wtf is incideration?
Multiz=none
Wordplay=damn, had more than breez
Metaz=breez, 1 vs damn none
Similies=breez,had 3 or 4, damn maybe 1
Diss=breez, the uppit line,and the crotch line, from breez the whoopi
cusion line
Personals=breez, used damn in his verse,weak nameflip, but damn cud
of dropped his verse on anyone...
Punches=none, wasnt feelin any
Complexity=damn, see potential, breez to simple
Closer=breez, set up was bad,but had some humour, meta, diss



close battle, breez got more cats,though i like damn style better
dont think i can justify givin the win to dam...overall breez more
consistant...more cats...stay up dam...no hate...both yall elevate

this was a murder somebody please call the police on breez lmao

Flow: rEEz
Structure: breez (wasnt very good but better then his)
Punches: rEEz
Personals: rEEz

v/breez no hate need i say more

v/ damn for having some nice vocab and dope punches and glahfgusonjgkrdfijyhodrtyhc

i vote breez better every thing
damn- elevate more work on yo structure no hate and every1 needs to elevate
nothin else to be said ^^^took the words right outta my mouth

v/breez

my bad already posted on here sorry for that ya'll

damn had some aight punches in da beginning of his verse and then it got worse and started laking on da punches and they got weaker......it seemed like damn had tryed to attempt too many multies.....wasnt feeling dat at all.......breez had betta punches and they hit a lot harder....his opener buried da hatchet.......he had betta lyrics and a little bit betta verse but it was a lil close.......breez didnt kill damn.....it jus coulda been betta......but gets ma vote.

vote/ breeze

peep ma beat and reply below here
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...wpost&t=258883

pnches-damn
flow-tie
wordplay-?
strycture-b reez
complexity-damn
rhyme quality-damn
creativity-damn

overall-damn
breez need to elevate those basic rhymes

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pnches-pedan
flow-tie
wordplay-?
strycture-b reez
complexity-pedan
rhyme quality-ped
creativity-peda

overall-pedan
breez need to elevate those basic rhymes

ok there's no poll anyway

so why isnt this closed then?

because the mod that fixed it..fucked it up...lol
i beat him 5-0 but a bunch of people didnt explain, so they re-opened it...but didnt fix the poll