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thnx upiipipipippin

leave links and i swear i'll comment/vote on ure battles and open mics

uppin

this was really good put alot of emotion into it overall it was a great peice keep it up
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nice man...i think dat story happends with every1 one of us
one day at a time

emotional nad deep i was feelin it through out but in some parts of ya verse you had tha flow messed up so try to work on the flow and strutcure slightly more maybe that will make the subject stronger the rhymin skeme was sorta basic
you had okay bars but the vocab needz some improvement okay but all in all this was ineterestin to my eyes nice work

tha idea was quite gud. it seemed real. the rhymes used wer also quite gud + der was a lot of emotion goin on. nice work.