You claimin ya hard but end up soft like hairgel
Aines gave me a buy-week...thats why i'll bid you farewell
vs.
just die cunt, o.v dose quick bitch, this isn't a game
so stop playing, kid and start living up to your name
v/untold
good battle
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You claimin ya hard but end up soft like hairgel
Aines gave me a buy-week...thats why i'll bid you farewell
vs.
just die cunt, o.v dose quick bitch, this isn't a game
so stop playing, kid and start living up to your name
v/untold
good battle
None of ya lines are hot kinda like the bitches that've kissed you
Something dope only hits you...when my fists rip through ya tissue
meh, i see where you were going
Ya bitch crew isnt even listed in ya sig, foo
V.I. gets more cold shoulders than families livin in an igloo
decent
You claimin ya hard but end up soft like hairgel
Aines gave me a buy-week...thats why i'll bid you farewell
another good concept that just seems to need better wording
This redneck doesnt have anything not even a mother with teeth
I'll sock U. ..............just to give him something to cover his feet
eh
Untold speaks in obscenities even though he dont got the balls for it
i wouldnt say sex is uncalled for..........because i know you call for it
lol this kinda made me chuckle, i dunno why tho :/
not a bad verse. fresh concepts.....seemed very rushed though. structure was kinda choppy. think that was also because you rushed it. with rewording and what not this coulda been much better
cock shit and bust, you'll never be better than me, whore
i'll help ray ban together, by showing him the 'thor'
good
your runnin on fumes dude, you better refuel, what say?
tryn'a get gassed up, you better off do'n circles around 'K'
meh
just die cunt, o.v dose quick bitch, this isn't a game
so stop playing, kid and start living up to your name
i like this, simple but hits hard
you hold up nothing, and ur audio'll never be put in roatation
so after that weak post..
..tony'll need all the help he can find to hold up the foundation
lmao, why does my name keep comin up in ppl's verses? decent punch though
fuck a sound station, your rhymes are wack and gay
i don't have to CBS to know everybody doesn't love ray
rofl and i dont even like that show
really only like one line i didn't like and that was the 2nd bar. besides that is was a pretty consistent verse. good flow and some nice witty punches
v/ untold
werd. :coolio:
This computer is loading slow as shit.
O.V. Dose- Nice multi/internal rhymes throughout, your buy-week/bid pun was your best line, the rest held up but wasn't particularly spectacular.
Untold came more aggressive, with consistently short snappy lines that got to the point. Liked both drops, though.
Vote: Untold
CBS line is bitten, tuh tuh. Well half bitten from what I know.
Untold won this but I ain't gonna put a vote down, coz
I got that little bit of doubt.
Ya bitch crew isnt even listed in ya sig, foo
V.I. gets more cold shoulders than families livin in an igloo
Untold speaks in obscenities even though he dont got the balls for it
i wouldnt say sex is uncalled for..........because i know you call for it
Vs
just die cunt, o.v dose quick bitch, this isn't a game
so stop playing, kid and start living up to your name
you hold up nothing, and ur audio'll never be put in roatation
so after that weak post..
..tony'll need all the help he can find to hold up the foundation
fuck a sound station, your rhymes are wack and gay
i don't have to CBS to know everybody doesn't love ray
V/Untold.
I thought OV would of won this. Last line by untold was dope
wtf? his name is ray and i bit that line? from where? i'm sure people have used CBS before, but i used it because of his name. so if you know of a battle someone used the same punch against this guy, with the same wording and same punch for this kid here, gimme the link.Quote:
Originally Posted by Brixton
don't ever accuse me of biting. not my style, son.
None of ya lines are hot kinda like the bitches that've kissed you
Something dope only hits you...when my fists rip through ya tissue
So so, concept was weird and not logical
Ya bitch crew isnt even listed in ya sig, foo
V.I. gets more cold shoulders than families livin in an igloo
Made me laugh but weak
You claimin ya hard but end up soft like hairgel
Aines gave me a buy-week...thats why i'll bid you farewell
Not bad
This redneck doesnt have anything not even a mother with teeth
I'll sock U. ..............just to give him something to cover his feet
Ok, wording was off
Untold speaks in obscenities even though he dont got the balls for it
i wouldnt say sex is uncalled for..........because i know you call for it
Nah
cock shit and bust, you'll never be better than me, whore
i'll help ray ban together, by showing him the 'thor'
Huh?
your runnin on fumes dude, you better refuel, what say?
tryn'a get gassed up, you better off do'n circles around 'K'
Nah
just die cunt, o.v dose quick bitch, this isn't a game
so stop playing, kid and start living up to your name
Pretty cool
you hold up nothing, and ur audio'll never be put in roatation
so after that weak post..
..tony'll need all the help he can find to hold up the foundation
Ok
fuck a sound station, your rhymes are wack and gay
i don't have to CBS to know everybody doesn't love ray
Seen CBS concept about 3 times lately but u worded it nice
Untold started off weak IMO but dropped pretty cool at the end. OV was just inconsistent throughout.
v/ Untold
ok. here man, ban together, and thor got banned. and instead of showing him the "door", i said "thor" saying he'd be better off banned.Quote:
Originally Posted by KempoMRK
get it?
untold wins
O.V Dose (2-1)
Untold (4-0)