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Well i dont got alot to say everything was aight i didnt get the last part of the verse/hook but flow was aight and da conecpt was unthoughtable nice - these was an exellent piece but u neva know this might be in HOF- Overall VERY Nice VERSE-
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shit was extremely hot, lack of a better word: fecal matter. heh, i loved the structure. its a nice concept, reminded me of some books i read waaaay back. this one came real strong. i think though, it may have gotten a little worse at the latter half of the third paragraph, but definitely picked up and finished it off big in the fourth. sick read, 8.5/10, keep droppin.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=259267 if u down
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This was great. Very smooth delivery and vocab was excellent in my opinion. Great imagery as well, kept me interested throughout. Very good job, keep it up.
thank ya. uppin
I felt this piece was repetative. The ideas were always jerkin' up, but they were all inside of the box, not really forming a decent story line. For the flow, Ill give you respect, because I like what you did with it.. but I think you could evolve more when writing about machines (especially) Overall, a solid peace, except for a couple flaws.
Keep doin your thing.
Peep WarHead, (It's near the top)
Pz man.
thanx man.
uppity
Creative
flow - gd
rhymin - alrite - bit simple in places
structure - gd
this ws a gd read...i enjoyed it
jus elevate your rhymin a bit and itll be brilliant, not jus gd
keep @ it
peace
thanx uppin
Structure-was tight
Multies-was ight
Flow-was ight
Metas-Good
Wordplay-Very good
Overall good drop 7.9/10
keep elevatein and ima do tha same......
wack feed, but thanx for takin time to at least read it