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Okay, so this was a good ass battle. Both of you showed up this week. This was some LLL type of shit. Well, im not suprised since both of you have been in LLL. But This was by far the best battle of the week. Ima give a full breakdown because of that.
Renagade.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/att...achmentid=17582
^His pic, Peep this to understand some of my punches
Definitions of macabre:
adjective: shockingly repellent; inspiring horror
Listen up..
That’s a tough name to carry.. But you’re the man for it, Bitch
Your looks ALONE could plot Steven Kings next big horror flick
Good punch. okay start.
Got to be the palest bit, Your in desperate need for sun, brother
So.. If the jabs turn you black & blue, just be grateful im givin’ you color
good punch, concept was cool, and good play off the pic
You need to brush up your steps kid, your “hip” moves are really toast
I can’t tell if your dancing, or signalin’ the kick aired between the posts
lol..
That shit you call hair is a dirty mess, I suggest you cut and chop
But I admit, It would look PERFECT on the head.. Of my mop
lol, look at his hair.lol.
Your hairline has no formation, Cant tell why that brawds cheesin
Your Fuckin ‘lineup’ has more cuts than n’ nba squad in preseason
meh, good punch. just meh though
Wit’ a dome like that I doubt you can pull a chick, u feel me nig?
Witta’ bitch I don’t got to do nuffin forhead - Yours is just REALLY big
lmao^
Even read some of your past verses, Nigga i'll leave you scarred
Your punch lines are so foul, the league gave you a yellow card
nah.
First weeks you didn’t do shit, Noob battles is where u stand b
Nigga lives off cutting’ bitches, like diddy in making the band three
nah
Hear me out, It’d be a dam shame if that’s the best you can do, man
Week 2, And at this point I’ve seen Rain Drop, Harder than you can
lol, i liked that concept.
Trus,Thor,Told,K,Tony,Rec,Brix,DZ,Meks,Ant, dood I lack words
Cuz itz clear you’re the worst of the ten << Try that word backwards
clever. Ten.Net
Calm down guy, had dood nervous as fuck when aines made this match
Had mac’s heartbeat soundin’ more like a bass sample for a techno track
yeh. heh.
Word is your poor as fuck, In those street alleys u needa guard ur breath
Poor Fuck, If he ever followed the 5 second rule he would starve to death
meh. cool.
I don't get the predictions, Cuz in real life you cant follow me son
If you ever said u have the heart of a lion.. Itz got to be the cowardly one
bleh @ the closer. could came harder in the end.
Macabre
Fuck you kid. Mac's known for tonnes of sins.
Dropped the 911, but I'ma still phone this one in.
cool. easy start, Renegade911
I keep it real while this nigga keeps it wimpy,
Dude, be fareal, only dope Ren came before Stimpy.
lmao^
You can't please a woman. 'N I ain't play cards, no doubt,
so..
I only poker face when ya girl's ass and pussy are worn out.
cool concept. didnt like the wording in it though.
My lines got the vital flows that leave brothas hurtin,
while
Nobody gettin Ade's like a room full of virgins.
good nameplay
Kids predict ya and shit, but fareal I don't get the hype.
If ya got this in the bag, must be the colostomy type.
cool.
And fuck you nigga, I bet you'll get owned,
Cuz we all feel Ade less then foreign poverty zones.
blah @ usin the same nameplay again.
Plus its blatant to see you're straight shook son
How you gonna spend so many lines on my pic, then not post one.
word.
And this kid cries all the time, fareal he must be gay
'n I can talk about ya girl n me, sensual be losing either way.
sensual...nice.
Plus this homie stalks bitches and ya'll know its true
Even ya IP changed its adress to get the FUCK away from you.
lol.
Just give up dun, we don't like the way ya sound
'n the only heavy rotation ya get is when turnin' around.
fat jokes. lol.
Dude, only a fag could understand how u slidin'
Its criminal how much ya shit makes people sigh, ren.
Dope^
Dude, look at all these dickriders praising you with word
Wreath?
I dont needa win the olympics to see a ring of herbs.
nice^
And you seem to forget, I'm above you, and well,
You're just another FL biter, tryna fit into LLL.
nah, weak closer.
Dope battle. Ren you came with some good ideas and concepts, the pic helped you out alot though. Mac I thought youd have to post a pic of Ren to even things up if you wanted to win, but you came fresh with a lota original concepts. Both of you put forth effort and it showed. Mac just seems like he knows more about what hes doing. I think the fact that mac didnt have to post a pic and still came dope was what won him the battle. Good shit.
Vote.Macabre
also
Vote.BOTW
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ah fuck. vote nobody yet. cause u both are fucking making my job harder. next week in EVERY battle one drops good n other wack. understood :mad: will edit later will final decision.
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no hate or nothing... but besides that poker line..
ur flippin alot of other people's concepts...being close to bitten.. like that Sensual line from Odin from RM.. unless u are Odin under this name..and the IP address line was used in the RBL not too long ago..maybe last week.
just for reference.. alot of Mac's stuff is flipped close to bitten... u should be careful Mac.. pplz r definetly sharking ur shit out to see if it is...
its flipped ... IMO
If i had to vote.. i'd edge to Renegade..he came wittier.. had the forehead line and aiite wordplay.. Mac had a few flipped punches that i jus saw a bit ago.. both came coo. best battle i read in the LLL so far.. im only postin coz Mac's concepts were interestingly close to some heads i noe..
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I never go on RM and ain't since I was Stigmeta, and that was before even the North and South shit. Your vote don't count btw. No hate, but it just seems biased.
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I'll break this shit down for ya fellas...
That’s a tough name to carry.. But you’re the man for it, Bitch
Your looks ALONE could plot Steven Kings next big horror flick
creative and harsh, nice
Got to be the palest bit, Your in desperate need for sun, brother
So.. If the jabs turn you black & blue, just be grateful im givin’ you color
Hits nicely cuz he's white
You need to brush up your steps kid, your “hip” moves are really toast
I can’t tell if your dancing, or signalin’ the kick aired between the posts
Nah, just not a harsh punch
That shit you call hair is a dirty mess, I suggest you cut and chop
But I admit, It would look PERFECT on the head.. Of my mop
eh, haven't seen it, but average
Your hairline has no formation, Cant tell why that brawds cheesin
Your Fuckin ‘lineup’ has more cuts than n’ nba squad in preseason
hot bar, I liked this
Wit’ a dome like that I doubt you can pull a chick, u feel me nig?
Witta’ bitch I don’t got to do nuffin forhead - Your is just REALLY big
Okay, but played
Even read some of your past verses, Nigga i'll leave you scarred
Your punch lines are so foul, the league gave you a yellow card
I saw a foul line like a week ago, but nice try
First weeks you didn’t do shit, Noob battles is where u stand b
Nigga lives off cutting’ bitches, like diddy in making the band three
Pretty nice
Hear me out, It’d be a dam shame if that’s the best you can do, man
Week 2, And at this point I’ve seen Rain Drop, Harder than you can
Drop shit is played. I used a line against lay awhile ago like "I'll make ya jaw drop harder than any of ya verses"
Trus,Thor,Told,K,Tony,Rec,Brix,DZ,Meks,Ant, dood I lack words
Cuz itz clear you’re the worst of the ten << Try that word backwards
I liked this
Calm down guy, had dood nervous as fuck when aines made this match
Had mac’s heartbeat soundin’ more like a bass sample for a techno track
Average, doesn't hit hard but witty
Word is your poor as fuck, In those street alleys u needa guard ur breath
Poor Fuck, If he ever followed the 5 second rule he would starve to death
lol, i liked this
I don't get the predictions, Cuz in real life you cant follow me son
If you ever said u have the heart of a lion.. Itz got to be the cowardly one
I feel coulda been worded better
vs.
Fuck you kid. Mac's known for tonnes of sins.
Dropped the 911, but I'ma still phone this one in.
nice, but 911 is gettin' played on him
I keep it real while this nigga keeps it wimpy,
Dude, be fareal, only dope Ren came before Stimpy.
Also played, seen something almost identical to this on him
You can't please a woman. 'N I ain't play cards, no doubt,
so..
I only poker face when ya girl's ass and pussy are worn out.
poker face.. aight, okay wordplay
My lines got the vital flows that leave brothas hurtin,
while
Nobody gettin Ade's like a room full of virgins.
I used ade's wordplay a long time ago but not bad
Kids predict ya and shit, but fareal I don't get the hype.
If ya got this in the bag, must be the colostomy type.
nice use of the cliche, hits hard
And fuck you nigga, I bet you'll get owned,
Cuz we all feel Ade less then foreign poverty zones.
lol, dope nameplay
Plus its blatant to see you're straight shook son
How you gonna spend so many lines on my pic, then not post one.
very basic line, but honestly probably the hardest hitting of either verse
And this kid cries all the time, fareal he must be gay
'n I can talk about ya girl n me, sensual be losing either way.
cool wordplay, haven't seen it
Plus this homie stalks bitches and ya'll know its true
Even ya IP changed its adress to get the FUCK away from you.
lol, pretty cool
Just give up dun, we don't like the way ya sound
'n the only heavy rotation ya get is when turnin' around.
hehe, this was decent for a fat joke
Dude, only a fag could understand how u slidin'
Its criminal how much ya shit makes people sigh, ren.
Another dope nameplay, pretty fresh
Dude, look at all these dickriders praising you with word
Wreath?
I dont needa win the olympics to see a ring of herbs.
Another hard hitter
And you seem to forget, I'm above you, and well,
You're just another FL biter, tryna fit into LLL.
why didn't you close strong man?
As we all know, this battle was close as fuck. Pretty much LLL quality right here, and I've been waiting to see a battle like this in JR. Here's the thing that bugs me about this battle. Renegade came really fresh and had some really funny shit, but the thing is, he used Mac's pic for too many bars. I love pic punches, but using more than like one when you yourself haven't posted one is a bit cheap n' Mac's personal about that hit hard. Overall, I felt Renegade came mad consistent. His verse was very polished and I'm extremely impressed with what I saw from you. However, I feel that Mac's wordplay was more fresh and in total, really had more "dope" bars, rather than decent bars. Great battle fellas.
Vote - Macabre
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That’s a tough name to carry.. But you’re the man for it, Bitch
Your looks ALONE could plot Steven Kings next big horror flick
Hear me out, It’d be a dam shame if that’s the best you can do, man
Week 2, And at this point I’ve seen Rain Drop, Harder than you can
Word is your poor as fuck, In those street alleys u needa guard ur breath
Poor Fuck, If he ever followed the 5 second rule he would starve to death
vs.
I keep it real while this nigga keeps it wimpy,
Dude, be fareal, only dope Ren came before Stimpy.
Kids predict ya and shit, but fareal I don't get the hype.
If ya got this in the bag, must be the colostomy type.
Dude, only a fag could understand how u slidin'
Its criminal how much ya shit makes people sigh, ren.
Just give up dun, we don't like the way ya sound
'n the only heavy rotation ya get is when turnin' around.
Dude, look at all these dickriders praising you with word
Wreath?
I dont needa win the olympics to see a ring of herbs.
Vote - Macabre
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Plus its blatant to see you're straight shook son
How you gonna spend so many lines on my pic, then not post one.
^ That's real though, just not worded into a punch. It's mad gay to use dude's pics without giving them yours.
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That’s a tough name to carry.. But you’re the man for it, Bitch
Your looks ALONE could plot Steven Kings next big horror flick
Not bad
Got to be the palest bit, Your in desperate need for sun, brother
So.. If the jabs turn you black & blue, just be grateful im givin’ you color
Liked this, nicely worded
You need to brush up your steps kid, your “hip” moves are really toast
I can’t tell if your dancing, or signalin’ the kick aired between the posts
Nah
That shit you call hair is a dirty mess, I suggest you cut and chop
But I admit, It would look PERFECT on the head.. Of my mop
Nice line, simple but hit hard
Your hairline has no formation, Cant tell why that brawds cheesin
Your Fuckin ‘lineup’ has more cuts than n’ nba squad in preseason
Wasn't feeling the wording
Wit’ a dome like that I doubt you can pull a chick, u feel me nig?
Witta’ bitch I don’t got to do nuffin forhead - Your is just REALLY big
Real nice
Even read some of your past verses, Nigga i'll leave you scarred
Your punch lines are so foul, the league gave you a yellow card
Nice, played concept though
First weeks you didn’t do shit, Noob battles is where u stand b
Nigga lives off cutting’ bitches, like diddy in making the band three
Nah
Hear me out, It’d be a dam shame if that’s the best you can do, man
Week 2, And at this point I’ve seen Rain Drop, Harder than you can
Not feeling the concept
Trus,Thor,Told,K,Tony,Rec,Brix,DZ,Meks,Ant, dood I lack words
Cuz itz clear you’re the worst of the ten << Try that word backwards
I don't get
Calm down guy, had dood nervous as fuck when aines made this match
Had mac’s heartbeat soundin’ more like a bass sample for a techno track
Nice, feeling this
Word is your poor as fuck, In those street alleys u needa guard ur breath
Poor Fuck, If he ever followed the 5 second rule he would starve to death
Eh?
I don't get the predictions, Cuz in real life you cant follow me son
If you ever said u have the heart of a lion.. Itz got to be the cowardly one
Not bad
Fuck you kid. Mac's known for tonnes of sins.
Dropped the 911, but I'ma still phone this one in.
Nice, cool bar
I keep it real while this nigga keeps it wimpy,
Dude, be fareal, only dope Ren came before Stimpy.
Not bad
You can't please a woman. 'N I ain't play cards, no doubt,
so..
I only poker face when ya girl's ass and pussy are worn out.
Bitten word for word from standard artist on b-boys. Shame b-boys is down otherwise I could show proof
My lines got the vital flows that leave brothas hurtin,
while
Nobody gettin Ade's like a room full of virgins.
Wasn't feeling, bit of a stretch for a nameplay
Kids predict ya and shit, but fareal I don't get the hype.
If ya got this in the bag, must be the colostomy type.
Nice
And fuck you nigga, I bet you'll get owned,
Cuz we all feel Ade less then foreign poverty zones.
Same concept again, better flip though
Plus its blatant to see you're straight shook son
How you gonna spend so many lines on my pic, then not post one.
Nah
And this kid cries all the time, fareal he must be gay
'n I can talk about ya girl n me, sensual be losing either way.
Nice bar, cool wordplay
Plus this homie stalks bitches and ya'll know its true
Even ya IP changed its adress to get the FUCK away from you.
Haha, nice
Just give up dun, we don't like the way ya sound
'n the only heavy rotation ya get is when turnin' around.
Nah
Dude, only a fag could understand how u slidin'
Its criminal how much ya shit makes people sigh, ren.
Pretty nice
Dude, look at all these dickriders praising you with word
Wreath?
I dont needa win the olympics to see a ring of herbs.
Niiice
And you seem to forget, I'm above you, and well,
You're just another FL biter, tryna fit into LLL.
Nah
This was very even at 6 decent/cool lines a piece, if I didn't know that that poker line wasn't bitten Mac would have had the vote here, but as it is, Renegade got this.
v/ Renegade
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LMAO, I don't care since it's not my verse y'all voting on, but I DO care about the quality of voting.
Everyone keeps saying that
Nobody gettin Ade's like a room full of virgins.
Cuz we all feel Ade less then foreign poverty zones.
these two lines "nah, used the same concept". But y'all are being dumb cos the first one uses AIDS as the concept and the 2nd one uses aid i.e. help that you send to poor countries as the concept. How is "help" and an STD the same concept?
Y'all need to up the quality of voting in this league
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Both are a nameplay on ade, hence it being the same concept.
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if you think about it like that, ok
oh and thanks for voting on mine :)
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vote mac
wording in sum punches lost this for ren, this battle was so good, i had to analyze everything, mac had better flow 2.
places where ren could've or should've had better wording
"I don't get the predictions, Cuz in real life you cant follow me son
If you ever said u have the heart of a lion.. Itz got to be the cowardly one"
"Even read some of your past verses, Nigga i'll leave you scarred
Your punch lines are so foul, the league gave you a yellow card"
everything else from you guys was just dope, good hard fought battle. ren watch ya wording in the long run man.
vote mac
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close battle mac wins
Macabre (3-0)
Renegade (2-1)
