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Alrite.....That was dope on both parts....the "hook" coulda been better, the L -----O------V----E part..
Very simple topic...but you 2 made it dope...i enjoyed the whole read...you two should do it audio...
nice rhyme scheme...and nice flows....the structure was nice n good too
one of the only OMs ive enjoyed reading more then once...props to Miss n Johnny
nice lil piece here. i like how ya'll join'd verses to show both sides. good concept. i'm really feelings johnny's piece. didn't know he could drop like that. really good shit, man. and miss clit, real good piece from you. everything seem'd to be right where it was s'posed to be. good shit from both. hit mine and tony's up, yo. thanx and good job.
Thanks for the feed *i'm a lil high so I might not have understood a thing I just wrote*
nice piece
flowed well
gd structure
gd rhymin but a bit too simple for my liking
overall it ws a gd drop - 8/10
keep it up both of u
not sure if i've comment on this befor, so if i hav, srry
thanx for the feed uppin
again very well thought andcomposed just lacks creative delivery other then that beautiful ideas and lyrics from both
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good piece i dont think i have to say more
ight....uppin for feedback
This was a good drop the topic was hot and straight forward both of ya had a good verse. Only thing I think ya should use more vocabs, and multies. Other than that this drop was hot.
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hmmm feelin it fo real.. enjoyed da whole piece... flowed well thru out da whole song n da structure wuz gud... it wuz nice & simple... keep it up! propz 2 both ya! gud work!!!