TwixSin V.s Vortex...Topical...

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Originally Posted by 1up

TwixSin - good verse. Lots of good multies, and you were very topical. Only thing I would say is a few things sounded a bit forced n' shit, and you also dropped off a bit in the middle.

Vortex - hot shit man. You were on point the whole way, had good multies, and I was really just feeling the overall verse. Flow could have been better, I think that's the one place where Twix had you, but overall, your verse was just better....deep and shit....very well written.

v/Vortex

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word.. didnt realy like da structure wich is prolyl wat fuked up da flow more than wording did.. but emotion adn erything else was felt more so vortex get da vote

Honestly I'm not much on the topicals, but I was feeling vortex's spit here. Flowed nicely, had some good concepts (so did TwixSin) and stayed on topic. TwixSin was complex as hell but I honestly didnt understand at times.
Imma go wit Vortex for better verse