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Yea i liked that shit and i like how you took it from point of views...also loved that flow i was able to beat bop my head with that shit nice drop jo...shiiiiiiiit
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Originally Posted by reincarnation
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I was feelin the topic...it was cool....strcuutre was good flow was good..
vocab was good and helped me visualize what was goin on......
i enjoyed readin this dope drop...both of your verses were awsome
rhyme scheme was pretty tigjht...keep it up both of you..
linkz are in sig check my oms out and leave sum feed..thanks
Flipping the roles kept it from being cliches, writing as the other person. The verses fit good together, I can picture this as a song. Not too much to critique, it worked for what it was meant to be.
This is ok.
Topic is meh, *gets lube* this topic is easy to write about but I feel you could of come alot more creative with it.Yoru concept witht he topic is to be expected when thinking of this subject. You should of done some diffrent angle to it and twisted shit up a bit more.
Vocab could be alot better, flow is good. imagery is nice.
ok drop, could of been better.
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bumpity bump for the figgity feed
let me up my page and it will rise to the top.............bump bump bump
This Was A Very Very Decent Peice....I Liked This Collab...U Both Were On Point In Flow And Emotion...But I Think The '...' To Keep The Structure From Being Wack Wasnt Very Good Lookin....U Need To Work On Multis And Metas....And Keep It Up....Pretty Decent...7.3/10
thx for the feedback.
wtf u lazy mo fo's
This contained comedy and dopeness at the same time...it was kinda graphic at some parts but created good...herm*...IMagrey? lol...good read guys, you had that sexual feeling going on and yall conqered it with ease...the subject was random and something not many people write on...keep writing and keep the shit dope...good job yall...*Loves*
~Nash
thx for the feedback nash.........uppin for more