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God Damn People Dont Sleep On This
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I really don't know...this piece was a bit agitating to read...all over the place with the topic. Vafinest and Demised definatly put out the best verses...lustful was good aswell...but syco and klepto didn't bring the fire...I had a hard time reading sycos the most...man you went off topic every now and than and rhymed the same words twice ...it flowed good tho, so I guess it counts...use variety in your vocabulary...I understand if you can't think of a word that rhymes you just tend to throw the same word in there...but really think about it and make complete thoughts and keep it dope at the same time. Use more metaphorical lines and shit...Yall came kinda nice...and vafinest...that jello line made me giggle...lol, it was kinda odd and just popped outta nowhere dogg...keep it coming tho yall...Vafinest if you read this...keep uppin our piece cause im only back for today....Peace and love yall...G'night
ayo i liked tha song...specially tha chuck norris line in tha 3rd verse...stay up all yall
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