Shadow

uppin for that feed

R U realy 10?

yes i am......now would you please leave feed on this OM

Damn I a1nt stat spitin until i was 11 but wat tha hell is a OM

this is an OM.....read my verse on the first page of this thread.....thats an OM.....then replay to this thread tellin me what you liked and disliked about it....if you confused read what everyone else put

oh I likes dat thats deep you is gd keep it up

This was a what's the word, different topic. It was very good. Creative and dope. It flowed well, Nice vocab. Very unique. The structure was dope. Overall I don't really have anything else to say. Overall 9/10

damn... props man. that shit was tense. don't hear shit that deep enough. shit was ill.

Damn this is some deep shit...I think this peice is the best I've seen in a while, you had solid structure n' flow..real good wordplay, it was sick bro I give ya a 9/10
keep dis shit up man an I'ma look out ~1

Damn jo that shit was nice...i liked the concept and how you put it in a little everyday story for the reader...keep it up

word thanks yall

up for some feed please

here's what i thought

Complexity:...........was it there o yes,......complexity was def there,....i liked the originality of everything bout this peice,........i can see u gave some effort..lol

Creativity:....was creative sence i read the topic u chose........i liked the wording,......nice

Word'd/vocab:.......vocab was str8,......coulda been better, but nothing to complaine about ya kno

Visual:..........visual was the only thing to me that was mehh yo,.....other than that this was a dope peice............use more visual words and you'll be str8

Overall 9.0/10

this was really sick man i wish i could do shit like that

word thanks mayne...up for feed