yo come on and vote ill vote in anybodys battle that votes in this 1...
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yo come on and vote ill vote in anybodys battle that votes in this 1...
damn this shit still aint closed damn good luck
if this cat was grass i'd be mowin tuckzz
this bout to be worse than murda mook vs. loaded lux
i'll bust in ya bitches inside and call it loaded fucks
let a nigga try to plot im loaded fucks
and if ya team wanna be prezidents, you'll be loaded bucks(dead presidents)
actin like your lines could use, move or lose me
you are wat you eat your girl tell you, smooch me coochie
you buy her jewls, i juss call her mi groupie
my jewls love to speak, so live n let stare
but u might get blinded if u look ya next glare
oh ya boy's move guns and they got techs, where?
you not a man you just a big bitch wit chest hair
drop the basket ball lines, stop ya dribble
im a really big guy and hot you little
why i call your girl my car is not a riddle
cuz i treat her juss like my hood and pop her middle
they say u fucked with the wrong peeps
cuz they'll leave ya face with cracks in it like concrete...(JOOK$)
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quit rappin... its the only way you can bring people joy
if rappin was football, this kid would be the waterboy
da bosses? if you guys say your good and its true...
then how come Syco_187 keeps beggin to join our crew?
.. you guys have no future.. but me, ima be a rap star
puttin a rock in your mouth and spitten it out
............is the only way you could spit stuff thats hard
man, in this battle im the hammer, and Jooks is a nail
his rhymes are older that food than gone stail
you done, finished, your punches are never hittin....
while im on some Pop'eye shit, eatin Jooks up like spinage
im like Mike Tison before he retired throwen these hard punches
i deliver what people want quick.. like fast food lunches
your crew is done kid.. in this battle A.S is takin the trophy home
we are mutha fucken kings.. YOU CANT remove us from our thrones
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jookz- ur gettin better ....be more creative but not bad
Tuckz- not bad either......decent wordplay and punches wins u this battle
v/tuckz
thanxs for being honest..Tuckzz is good ill admit that.but uppin for votes..
iight yo uppin for at least one vote..lol..lets close this...
yo lets get this closed yall can read but not vote thats some shit!!!!!!!!
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=244687
Vote on that^^^
Mayne this waz nuthin 2 tuckz.................he had betta punchez...........betta flo...........structure waz o.k............tha personalz were a tie........multiz.........none........metaz none..........Vote Tuckz........hit up my battle yo please........itz a crew battle
uppin for closure votes... come'on get this closed
v-tuckzz,for better pucnhes, and wordpla, but both of ya need to elavate
Uppity Uppity 4 Tuckz................................
vote tuck
tucks had way more creative harder hitting punches then jooks.
tucks
good flow nice strucutre hard hitting punches personals was ight could have been better lots of creativity and good wordplay nice vocab usage. overall a enjoyable verse, was feelin your punches more then jooks
jook
ya came a bit soft with punches plus most of ya verse was based on wordplkay in my opinion I didnt see aythign that got at tucks so man ya goota step up ya punches and personals. good flow and strucutre but that doesnt win battles
v/ tucks
better punches n personals
be sure to hit my link back with sum
chea