some body come battle me on quick flows
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some body come battle me on quick flows
it was decent...but you didn't know pac...why u writein about him
That was fuckin good. Good topic, a lil played out but still good. liking the multi-sylabbles and more than one lline ryhmes
it was alright
u need to wrk on ur rhyming a bit, but i know it can be harder to rhyme well wen ure stickin to a topic
gd topic - it was true
i couldnt really see the flow, and i think i can only see u talkin it, not rappin it
apart from tht the piece was alrite - 6/10
that shit was tight except it was a little boreing after a while u need swithc styles
this shit was allright i could feel ur heart and u tried 2 have some big words i respect that but damn hoime wtf is up wit the same ryme ova and ova again. u jus kept wit the tion at the end of each word. but it was an ight drop jus use some more creativity wit the flow and ryme sceme and ull be aight
That is great, it flows very well.
uppin last time...can i please get some more feedback....all da stuff u guyz have left so far has been great...thank you but i want more! lol
dogg stop uppin this....u got enuff feedback u need to improve. just drop anuther one...............
not hatin u just upped this too much................