Lyrical Hustle

yo this got rave reviews a while back so imma up it and see what today's crowd thinks of it...cheers and such

nice,

vocab was complex the flow was great.. the multis were everywhere and good at that
unlike most the multis werent just words put together to rhyme they actually had a meaning to em..

-Elevated now elated, graduation been belated, movin through the hatred the hardest of things.
-Estimated then excavated, disseminated then decimated, now hoods is extra vacant, harness the strings.
-Circumnavigated then circulated work, perpetrated shirk then percolated, lawlessness stings.
-Discriminated but emulated tone, insinuated I emanated the throne, flawlessness signifies my signature, pardon the immature, pissin on raw sixteens

^ loved it

preciate the feed...uppin for more new age opinions lol .

yo nigga dat shit waz bangin espeacialy dat cerry poppen line.

you got ill vocab and word play but it really aint lead no where, there were no particular events, you keep describing a lot of emotion but the emotions dont describe a scene or a story. id like to hear something personal and to the point, something not every one can relate to, something that strays beyond nice rhymes and shit. it doesnt have a homely feeling, its hectic.

dont think im bein an asshole, i think the shits hot, so why say good stuff, its obvious.

-Stopped on blocks, dropped on hock, rolled on souls, just buried cherries popped on those.
- Shot up and poisoned street veins run deep on the clock, see treason get knocked on woes.
-The shop lifted on lock restricted entrance, malevolence carries a greater sentence from top it grows.
-Spot train, drop the refrain, picture perfection attempted but not in the frame, knots in the name, base headed cant stop on goes.

you should give more credit to these lines and elaberate, tell a story i think it would compliment your style better

tight shit man...you got flow for days...
fav. lines were:
-Stopped on blocks, dropped on hock, rolled on souls, just buried cherries popped on those.
- Shot up and poisoned street veins run deep on the clock, see treason get knocked on woes....liked how you opened up on this one....

8/10

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