Mental War- My Spirit Soars.

... wow how do i critisize that? damn that shit was dope man... good use of ur vocab, nice flow 2 it... structure was good... nice topic... multis were amazing, they were a very strong point on that piece... i dont kno how 2 give constructive critisizmn on that piece... there was room for improvement... there always is... but there's very little room to improve... good work i hope 2 c more frum u...

peep the OM's in my sig... prefferably the last 1... thanx...

Thanks for the feed back bro...

I will leave feed as soon as I can.

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Originally Posted by Illus'Artis

No it doesn't , all of my lines are unique
and rare. A true artist can do that .


I should make you feed me..

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pshhhhh....brewed force? you suck at playin' dumb.

Solid OM though, 2nd part could use some touching-up but wow, congrats on being literate. your wordplay and multis made me all tingly, and that's no lie.

^ Ty hommie...