rhyme scheme n flow was dope. yer one of the few that ive actually saw multis from on this site, nice. i have nuthin much to criticize, i really enjoyed this piece. my fav lines:
‘‘and make this Earth - this world - crumble in my palms
while the few - still religious folk is mumblin' they psalms’’
hot ending, keep it up.Quote:
‘‘so I'm crackin' down on this chunk of rock
wiping free the slate and killing the blunted cops
now see this world split and fall into a million pieces
without humans n animals theres world peace ’’
