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the truth comes out vafinest i heared u were blood? well i just joined the bloods
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Big nash IN tha houuuuse....Lets get some feed
thanks for comments yall ^^^....
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you had some madd grammatical problems in ya spit son and Repairments is NOT a word dun....other than that you had real weak wordplay...the most that i liked outta this is the rhyme scheme you had set up in the first verse....there were some highlights...:
squeeze and bust,no hesitation,no explanation,do it for recreation,body preperation
the law we use to breakin,they jaw used 2 breakin,I did it now get mad reputation (finisher of this line was bad wordplay).....
i like multi's so thas why i kinda favored this (n decided to actually read ya piece)...other than that work on ya style....stay up
igido
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