Oh Word Presents : Victoms Of Another Reality

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Originally Posted by lyricalgangsta

if u people like this for real then put it in the legendary pieces if not i want to be in H.O.F so pplez tell me how i can elevate my verse to get there

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pay close attention to feed, and drop consistantly and ull elevate

iight thnx alot , i really appreciate that and im working on a OM with my crew ILL SCRIPTS right now and it will b up tomorra

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Originally Posted by Johnny 6-feet

I figured someone would do a piece on Katrina, the piece was ok. I think you both could've gone into more detail with your imagery and improved the wording (vocab) of your lines. Your styles gelled well enough and you kept me reading. Some multi's would've made this easier to read though. Its good to see someone tackling this recent tragedy on the board.

Keep posting fella's.

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what he said

that is not good feed and u cud get banned for that

plez leave feed that is ur own words and significant

4 or more lines

thanx
this is your first and last warning

this goes for u aswell

plez leave accurate feed or ur post will jus be deleted and u may be banned from a forum

plez read the stickies

-LG

ur an idiot cuz u admitted to freeposting

and ur about to get banned b4 u get 100 post so

ludic~assassin= Banned

-LG

fuck u and i cant wait until u get banned and u jus wasted all that time
if i was at full mod status i wud ban ur ass at the third post bitch

can we get some actual votes in this bitch thnx

Shit's not bad, pretty good keep it up, post some more shit, give my shit some feedback peace

uppin

This shit's pretty nice, both word soild keep is up do you guys have any more shit up on open mic?... i'd give this a 7/10

uppin

iight uppin on this thnx mos appreciated

Nice verses from both, i liked the bouncy feel, yet i thought it lacked some kind of emotion. Not sure..

The lines were all equal, and all equally linked... Some nice wording from both emcees in there. In future i would try and make more words link to the topic, put some powerful words that make a blunt point about whats happening there etc..

Fave lines:
Donations are being made... but all the people are still tryna Go on
Fore-seein all america's agendas but yet i still wonder if N.O is One
^Extremely well put together, rhyming was there, and your point was put across 100%.
Lyrical Gangsta i didnt really select any of your lines as standing out, but the whole verse was put together with a quality rhme scheme, i like the way you kept it non-tradegy.. by putting that Bush line in at the end. Props to both for the verses and topic, well done.

Rtf in my sig.

iight thnx for the feed bak on this and uppin
peace