Rizzo Vs. {Mr. Key}(500posts 2 vote) HOT BATTLE!!!

Vote/ Rizzo i dont know how Keys was considered better? Maybe im just retarded but i read it over a few times and saw nothing out of the ordinary, while Rizzo had nice wordplay and metaphores to go with this. Both had well structure but i thought this easily went to Rizzo.

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Originally Posted by lyricalgangsta

mr key ~ how the fuck do u win any of ur battles homie........... ur rhmyes are so basic
all u got is a structa ....... im not trying to sound like a hater but that verse wasnt well put out at all . u had no personals and ur rhymes were too basic also u had no creativity at all . so i give u a 3/10 u might have jus had a bad day or somethin but keep ya head up and in the game

rizzo~ this is mos def not one of ur best spits ...... i have seen much better from you. u where extremely creative tho and the key on the bottom was a major plus and got my attention to read ur verse twice . u had a good structure and ok punches . great personals as well. 8/10 keep ya game up homie

vt/rizzo for reasons above

plez vote on my battles as fairly as i voted on urs

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word up same hurr

key- lol kinda wack.......you opener was iight....your middle was decent....your ender was bad man.....you need to add a nice punchline at the end becasue that will make your whole verse better....your flow was okay....your flow transition was decent also...your vocab wasnt that good......your wordplay was okay.....you need to use wordplay more because that will make your verse more interesting and also better.....overall i wasnt feeling this verse right here.....i couldnt even find key lines that i liked in there

rizzo-that was good....your opener i was liking....taht oepned up your verse well.....your middle was good also....but your ender was better....your ender supported your verse because it was strong......your flow was good..flow transition from line to line was good also.....your wordplay was nice......liking that wordplay....your punch lines was nice also....they hit better than mr key.....the lines that i liked the best has to be punches el make u duck if u tail*, sorta like hewy, dewy, and louwy* chewy*, u need start ya like over, press rewind then roll* like a movie...........LOL nice line right there......overall i liked this verse.........My rymhes el maek more cense than yuors if i meixd up the lettrse/ in the 1st post i put up "hs rules"*, he gone say "college is better"/*......that was a nice punchline man...

overall-rizzo won because of better ender, punchelines, vocab, and wordplay