LyricalGangster ~vs~ -IsIs-

more votes u need 200 post to vote so get at it yall , peace niggaz

leave a link and I will hit it up , fairly

yo ill hit up this battle if u hit up one of mine in frontlines...ill be back if sum1 votes........1

lyrical-
not a bad verse. Worek on a few things, get rid of using a rhyme for more than 1 bar. Mutlies are cool, but thats annoying and dumb. You came with some basic threats that were gay but you also had some goodwordplay and personals...
isis-
uh... you had a lot of filler.... the closer pensis thing was really gay. I hate to say this but you came almost whack. you didnt use any good wordplay with this kid. and look at his name... you didnt land any solid punches....
v/ LG...

predicting the future , well heres ur mortuary brochure
seen ur rhymes b4 u got no structure , Isis is a tru cutter
my rhymes smooth like butter , ur rhymes are jus stutters
them punches u spit better off in the gutter , old man go putter
u dont believe in styles cuz u got none , in yo family u shunned
hurry now , when u were born yo mom asked for a refund
ghost in a shell.............. rhymes better off burnin in hell
cant get a real girl , always hittin a .................dryspell

vs.

Now I Will speak its simple I must be loose,
Ima stand straight face to face with you, and cut off all your pimp juice,
Lyricalgansta, trippin off his own hype, tryin to battle Ice,
but only droppin shit, when he types,
Inspite of height, and the phatness of his weight,
im stompin on shit he walks on, his wackness depicts his fate,
his chaos has been defined, so clearly hell be suicidal after this line,
in due time, ill get mine, hell be fed his,
but speak clearly, when you try to spit against the IsIs,

both was a ok verse, good battle on both sides but i thought lyrical won cuz of better structure. this was a close battle, punches was both, personals was both, but lyrical also had better wordin and understandable verse. easy 2 read. flow was both and creativity was both. so L won for structure and wordin.

v/l

ill get at this later............................................

Lyrical took this...He had more multis and *fair* structure...Flowed with ease...Not many new punches...Same for Isis...This battle was almost right down the middle...But Lyrical came out with a litte bit more punches than Isis...Wasn't an enjoyable level...THE BREAKDOWN!!!

Structure: Lyrical
Flow: Tie
Punches: Lyrical
Enjoyability: Lyrical...(at a very low level)
Creativity: Isis

V/ Lyrical...Better verse all around..
Flow:

iight uppin on this , lets get some more votes , u need 200 post to vote on this

uppin #5 cmon people lets get some votes. 200+ to vote.

predicting the future , well heres ur mortuary brochure
seen ur rhymes b4 u got no structure , Isis is a tru cutter
my rhymes smooth like butter , ur rhymes are jus stutters
them punches u spit better off in the gutter , old man go putter
u dont believe in styles cuz u got none , in yo family u shunned
hurry now , when u were born yo mom asked for a refund
ghost in a shell.............. rhymes better off burnin in hell
cant get a real girl , always hittin a .................dryspell

vs.

Now I Will speak its simple I must be loose,
Ima stand straight face to face with you, and cut off all your pimp juice,
Lyricalgansta, trippin off his own hype, tryin to battle Ice,
but only droppin shit, when he types,
Inspite of height, and the phatness of his weight,
im stompin on shit he walks on, his wackness depicts his fate,
his chaos has been defined, so clearly hell be suicidal after this line,
in due time, ill get mine, hell be fed his,
but speak clearly, when you try to spit against the IsIs

v/ IsIs

cuz he had a betta all around verse and ta me just more creativity, l-gangsta urs was good too so it wuz kinda hard but in da end IsIs took dis

isis-nice verse wit stron punches and a nice flow, ure lines were a little too stretched and thats the only thin i didnt likeabout your battle verse other than u won

lyrical-u had a nice verse too, the thin i didnt like about it was that u made comparisons in every line. u need to spread ya shit out so we dont become bored of readin it.

vote/isis

ma votes fa isis cause
he has betta structure
n flow
n vocab
i was felling it a lil mo
than lyrical gangsta
V/Isis