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yo this shit was tight i personally thought. i like your rhyme scheme alot, it makes the flow bangin. if you put that shit onto an audio, it would sound dope i bet. but anyway, your first bar pulled me in right away. the imagery was real nice. 'n i saw some people say that lines were a little stretched... that shit doesnt matter as long as it flows, which yours did... so i wouldnt really think anything about that. keep this shit comin man,liked it alot.
good scheme and i liked the idea
pretty good nice struture and flow overall good
you already replied the reason...but thats tight or what ever...thanks Jay
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Yo i was really feelin diz. Nice flow, voacabulary n all. Nice rhyme scheme 2. U got talent. Keep em comin. Hit up da links in my sig if u can 4 me.
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iam from new york i will eat you like ork show me your ryhmes cuz i aint seeing any nick nack patty wack give a dog a bone i will crush your rap then i will be gone
what tha fuck was that dumb shit supposed to be...and who gives two fucks if your from new york...that doesnt make you any better fuck tard...laughable newbies