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Pretty nice piece here Who?.. didn't get a chance to read it earlier.. but I enjoyed it. Had a nice easy going flow, had meaning to the piece, showed some well thought out emotion developed through the read. Overall, pretty nice.. keep up playa.
Thanks Cam, up.
This piece was good....It coulda been better....You have to work on ya structure and also make it a little bit longer wit da lines....This had imagery so i think you shoulda made it longer.....Da flow at times were off so work on that too......Pretty good....
Check out my om:
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=220903
Thanks, up. Your link was hit up too.
ima a get at u bitch iight peep gameQuote:
Originally Posted by Who?
who u talkin bout mind over matter/
ill put shells in ur chest and jus watch ur blood splatter/
have u hunched forward with ur head to ur bladder/
u should have known better boy/
and like mc shan u can kill that noise/
nigga u can get smoked like a cigar/
cuz wen im spitten bar 4 bar/
the flows hit u faster then nascar/
so wen i see u i let u kno i got the gat/
cuz like noia nigga my whole team clap/
another banger 4 another dumbass nigga :nerd: thats u right now lookin at the crack that i jus spit
yo all i can say about your verse who was i loved it.
the flow was great as was the structure.
pz.
could you levae honest feed on this please ?
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=220974
shotty man wat verse u talkin bout
who's.
but you keep it up too dawg.
ill rash both of u lil nigga
stfu herb.
UP, If you leave you know, at least two lines, of real feedback, I will leave feed on yours.
So ah up.