To my niece and nephew Julio and Jalia. Please don't sleep on this.

The time has come to say goodbye.
I will never forget looking in your eyes.
Even if I didn't seen you, you will be loved*.
God has takin you,to live with him above.
-Very deep 7/10

Life has its ups and downs, and this was a mudslide.
I'm glad your with the lord and resting by his side.
I have to face the facts, it an't no reason to hide.
Life without yall is like washing clothes without tide**.
-NIIIICE 8/10

At first you have something you love,and then like that its gone.
I never really saw you,but somehow I feel all so alone.
I will never forget you, and the 5 weeks you lived.
As long as I'm on this earth,then forever you will live.
-Aight...6/10

I've kept you in my prayers, but the lord has spoken.
Julio and Jalia you were took like a gold token***.
I hope you rest in piece, and remeber you will be loved.
-Very emotional...7/10

All around...8/10

It was definitly filled with much emotion...very deep piece girl. And im sorry to hear bout ur nieces passing away...R.I.P

U think U could return the favor by voting on the battles in my sig? It would be much appreciated...
Please watch out for your family in the heavens above.

Thanks for the feed, Like I said i'll return the favor~1~

damn gurl thas deep, I feel ya pain tho....keep ya head up homegurl an keep up the flow......DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUVAAAAALLLLLL!!!!!! ha.... peace!

Thanks ma. This is really my last time uppin all the feedback on this OM.

yo, that was pretty deep, i felt the emotion in that 1... and i no it hard ta spit bout shit like that, brings all tha emotions bak 2 da surface... pretty good piece, i woulda liked to see it longer but since u only know em fo' like 5 weeks there's not really many memories ya had between em... ya still showed alot o emotion and the rhyme scheme was very well played out... vocab coulda been improved on buts i hav that prollem 2 so im not gons a harp on ya fo' dat cuz that would make me a hipocrate... the flow was good, the bars was all tha same length so that made it easier to catch tha flow... syllable count was on... i liked this piece, but it was kinda brief...

keep goin, check out mine, similar ta ya's but alot longer... it called Miss My Dawgs, c tha signature... good job

i liked it and how it drew me to read more
duval people got that talent

yo kp904 which part of duval u from

yeah its all about that Duval.