Miss My Dawgs

Life is hard at these points, I don't know the pain you're going through but as I mentioned before in my feed... you gotta live life now because you may be the only person who remembers what they want to be remembered for.. Something they did or something you's did together, you gotta stay around to keep that real, you gotta stay up to remember them... If you're gone, who will have the memories only you and your brother shared? nobody.. You gotta have the will to survive for them my brother, you are now there strength, and there memory, go from here. Dedicate your life to them, and live it the best you can, be strong.

Ill pour out some liqour for your friends and your brother tonight, Hell i'll even say a prayer, but there will be no prayers for you unless you stay where God can see you, and where the memories stay... Right here, don't do fuck all stupid man, revenge is sweet, but just think about the revenge you are willing to give?

Up'n this for Ta2 Tears, Ill speak to you soon man, stay strong and be cool

Peace.

Thanx homie and i'll try 2 keep my cool... but i tell you now! if those niggaz come ta my crib, where my son iz, i packin fo' gats now and i gotta pop em fo my safety and tha safety of my son..

and the whole hood poured out the liquor fo my brotha, even tha muthafuckin crips.. chris was a good man and he neva snitched, he played by tha rules, a true soulja man... shiit i gotta stop talkin bout this shit, makes it worse...

Yo I liked this verse it was deep but the only thing I would change in it was the titles. I don't know what it should be but I should be something more from your heart so that way people will know what it's about before they hear the actual song or read the actual lyrics . That's whats up the I laugh at times in this and I felt sorry at others . I don't even know you but because of that song , you seem cool . Im ghost........

uppin

yo uppin niggaz

leave feed bitches

important 2 me homies

It was Friday, April 29th, the night that my bro was stolen,
if we're all God's plan, then did he plan for that gat to be blowin?
-average 6/10

i guess life leads in different directions, we never really knowin,
and now that you left in a different direction, got me wonderin where am i goin?
-nice 6.5/10

ACE nigga, you always said you had to play wit the cards you were dealt,
And now unfortunately I'm sittin in my house by myself,
-aight 6.5/10

not used to rappin wit out you here to help,
and poof your gone, after all this shit we been through,
and i noe that lil' jarome is gon' miss you,
-aight 6.5/10

you was always there for him, you was the best uncle that exists dude,
before you died he said he wanted to do things jus like unkie chris do,
-niiice emotion 7/10

and then u died, right afta that chat wit my man Issue,
Nigga I’m sure he gon’ miss you too,
And I promise I’ll be with you soon,
Nigga,
-niiice...6.5/10

I grew up in the hood, therefore the hood is all I know
I grew up wit sum niggaz, then watched them niggaz go,
-below average 5.5/10

I knew that night I shouldn’t of left you guys,
Three gunshot blasts, suddenly three of my homies died,
-nice feeling 7/10

We was never wealthy niggaz, but we was hood rich,
Spent many long nights, just chillin wit our click
-aight 6/10

Now all I got left is A-C-E r.i.p tatted on my wrists,
It’s the shit,
Cuz you a nigga that is gonna be missed, as I sit here writin this,
-average 5.5/10

I gotta resist the temptations of crying, I must persist,
Live my life to the fullest, and maybe one day in the midst,
-niiice 7/10

I’d see you my niggaz, see y’all at thugs mansion, see y’all through the fog,
But that’s not until later, all I can do now is just miss all o my dawgs,
-bad flow 5.5/10

I remember all the times we had as a crew,
Young and clueless, spent hours jus kickin it sniffin some glue,
-sniffin glue lmao...6/10

Smoking blunts, while we grippin on twos,
Have to discipline niggaz, for steppin on our shoes,
-niiice 7/10

Runnin up on their front lawns, guns drew,
Crank up the NWA, shut off that blink 182,
-aight 6.5/10

From living the glorious life, young prankstas,
Then we grew to notorious life, cold gangstas,
-niiiiiice 7.5/10

And for what, to be buried at the age of 25?
The chances are against us, there’s no way to survive, livin this hood life,
-average 6/10

I’m gonna miss every day together that we’ve spent,
Many days hustling, just to make a few cent,
-nice 6.5/10

Even those 3 years we spent in the pen,
I’d do it all over again, just to be wit u again,
-nice emotion...bad flow...too basic....6.5/10

But you’re gone now, and I gotta accept the reality of your fatality,
But I don’t know how? With all your vitality,
-eh 5.5/10

nigga you took 5, I thought you had immortality,
But I guess that I was lead wrong, that’s why I wrote this song,
So I have a piece of you, now that you’re gone,
-average 6/10

Muthafucka,
And don’t worry niggaz, I’ll take care of your kids and wifes,
Cuz you’ve taken care of me all my life nigga,
-bad flow...5.5/10

We’ve been together fo’ 18 years, livin in this life of war,
You’ve been wit me through all my tears (gun cocks) and now it’s time to get some more
-nice finish 7.5/10

Overall - 6.5/10

If you cold extend your vocabulary, add some multies, and improve ur flow just a lil bit more u'd be sick dog. Watch out for this nigga...

N' can U return the favor by voting on the battles in my sig?

k i did man... thanx fo feed nigga...

k yo this is tha last time im uppin so drop sum feed niggaz

hey man i felt ya shit nigga, it was deep i like your story and your imagery as said also. sorry ta hear what happened but nigga keep rappin, shit was deep

thanx man i will... got ne pieces i will return tha favor... im writin sum shit now... jus gotta touch up tha chorus, check it out... it'll b on soon

This was really deep. I realy felt strong emotion from this piece. Nice images with your words. I like this song, but I'm sorry u had to write it.

thanx for tha feed... post a url i will return fav