elushun vs evil one

dont have 100 posts yet but evil king got my vote

vote please i'll rdf

[QUOTE=FLYEST NIGGA EVA]I’m murder you lyrically, Shove 5 bars in ya abdomen…
Guaranteed you’ll be in a coffin, while I’m celebrating my win…
^^^THAT DIDNT REALLY RHYME TO SMOOTH-WACK
I’ma slice ya throat, and contradict what ya wrote…
Putt a stop ta ya career early, like capsizing a boat…
^^^DONT GET IT-WACK
This was just a quick key, and im still overthrowing king…
You were on top, until I took over the game, Like Yao Ming…
YAO MING HASN'T TAKEN OVER THE GAME... HOMIE WATCH THE NBA... PICK SOME ONE BETTER TO COMPARE YA SELF TO.... YAO IS KNOWN TO BE NON AGRESSIVE-WACK
I’m not comin hard; I could beat you with ease, you not to me level…
You not the true evil king, that my name nickname aka I’m the devil…
^^^^ COULDA WORDED IT A LIL BETTER- STILL WACK THO
I’m putting an end to this battle; end ya beneath the 6feet deep…
I’m make sure to comfort your mother at the funeral as she weeps…
ONCE AGAIN CAN WORD IT A LIL BETTA-WACK THO

listen nigga we might be in da same crew/
but i'll still take out da nine and frame you/
UHH WEAK BUT BETTA DEN ELUSHUN
i rip out ya tounge so you can't speak/
niigga ya raps like newborn babys they weak/
WEAK
no condom when i fucked ya mom's so you might be my son/
if rap was like da matrix den i might be da one/
OK MAKES SENSE-IM FEELIN THAT
yeh you in my team but da truth is i don't even feel you/
in this battle i'ma treat you like a big roach and i'ma kill you/
WEAK
i don't play so when i come threw you betta wear a vest ight/
nigga last time i saw you,you was in a dress saying you dress to fight/
DATS AN OK LINE
face it you can't do nothing you my son/
people shouldn't even vote cause it's a fact i won/
EHH... ITS AIGHT

v/evil king

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please vote man i wanna close dis battle already i'll rdf

evil king gets this battle better strucure better verse betterr ryhmes

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I’m murder you lyrically, Shove 5 bars in ya abdomen…
Guaranteed you’ll be in a coffin, while I’m celebrating my win…
Great opener nice punchline (way to come after your opponent right of hand)
I’ma slice ya throat, and contradict what ya wrote…
Putt a stop ta ya career early, like capsizing a boat…
okay word play but fake I'm not tryin to hear that
This was just a quick key, and im still overthrowing king…
You were on top, until I took over the game, Like Yao Ming…
Very nice THAT SHIT IS CLOWNIN wonderful word play
I’m not comin hard; I could beat you with ease, you not to me level…
You not the true evil king, that my name nickname aka I’m the devil…
not that great considering what u already put
I’m putting an end to this battle; end ya beneath the 6feet deep…
I’m make sure to comfort your mother at the funeral as she weeps…
good closer

"GREAT VERSE HOMIE"


Vs.


listen nigga we might be in da same crew/
but i'll still take out da nine and frame you/
uhh no offense but if u in the same crew why battle?? Thats not crackin
i rip out ya tounge so you can't speak/
niigga ya raps like newborn babys they weak/
good line but not a great punchline
no condom when i fucked ya mom's so you might be my son/
if rap was like da matrix den i might be da one/
Good word play way to turn it around and hit hard
yeh you in my team but da truth is i don't even feel you/
in this battle i'ma treat you like a big roach and i'ma kill you/
Again we aint tryin to hear about "he in your crew" besides we already know that, from the opening line but nice metaphore
i don't play so when i come threw you betta wear a vest ight/
nigga last time i saw you,you was in a dress saying you dress to fight/
good line like the double standard
face it you can't do nothing you my son/
people shouldn't even vote cause it's a fact i won/
Good closer way to stay confident



Overall...It was kind of a close battle but HONESTLY I'm gonna have to say that Elushun took this one he came off with the punchlines and had way better originality.
But it was a great battle. Looking forward to the rematch.


V/ Elushun

i think evil king won, he came harder and was a little more original, although u both said some played shit, anyway v/ evil king