is there any1 out there no responds lately plz vote yall need this to be closed thnx
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is there any1 out there no responds lately plz vote yall need this to be closed thnx
vote for me............and ill vote 4.....................
bumpin this up a fifth time.
if ya gonna vote, explain the damn votes. im sick of this battle gettin slept on
good battle capone your gettin nice.. just need to work on the personals and punches more and youll be knockin them out more
in this battle i felt forensyx won because he had more creative punches and his disses hit harder.. capone i felt had a good flow to his piece but his disses werent that creative.. the po pop lines werent hard hitting.. forensyx takes this in my opinion based on his punches
v0te-forensyx
ok thnx reality for ur opinion askin for more votes plz
FORENSYX
resurrected from the grave, ill reintroduce you to the cemetary
cuz ill fuck up this bitch like a texan vetinary
HA
slice ya spleen, rip out ya bowel and stuff it down ya throat
cuz it's the only way your shit could make any emcee around ya choke
GOOD GOOD GOOD, GOOD
he's a joke, but the punchline's as funny as brain cancer
your disses couldnt turn heads if you doubled up as a breakdancer
WACK
my words leave you speechelss, thers no way you could still rap on
regardless of ya name, in this battle when it comes to weak emcees I'LL (Al) cap one
GOOD WORDPLAY
its a wrap son, body bag waiting for a casket
dead gansters are too late stopin not realising your past it
WACK
now IVE got the tommy gun, you just left with tommy
play with his gun, find white stuff and Al's gotta ask mommy
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA KINDA WACK BUT FUNNY
did puberty never hit? did i rip this bitch too young?
instead of dropping, did his balls pack up and move on?
IGHT PLAYA
like a limp dick slippin pets, you the weakest in do(da)minion
you either ejaculate small female grizzlies, or come with the 'bear mini mum'
HA
so rapbattles, lets keep this slaughter between you and me
I want the front seats at this motherfucker's eulogy
AVERAGE
AL CAPONE
This mothafucka can't rap u need to cut your teeth/ (to learn something)
U can actually gain some experience from me/
WACK
Ull be dead by tha knife ill cut u efficiently/
Rip ur retina lose ur vision so u can't see/
WACK
He doesn't rhyme yo u wastin my time/
His names forensic he fuckin solves crime/
THAT WAS NOT HOT
So what does this mean hes po-po, 5-0, another cop/
And this means i get out my fo-fo, M-16 and u get popped/
WACK AS FUCK NIGGA WTF?
This mothafucka talkin bout my eulogy so ur sayin im great/
But i havent died yet but death in two hours is ur fate/
HAHAHAHAHAAHA YOU SUCK DAWG WTF?
This nigga will die at seven and his funeral is at eight/
Leave forensyx body dumped and noone who will locate/
HUH?
Like mortal kombat bitch i'll create fatalities/
But this aint a videogames son this is reality/
FINALLY SOMETHING DECENT NOT BAD
Stop rappin and go take ur criminal justice class/
What i do is tha criminal injustice so kiss my ass/
WACK
Everybody can tell u a cop cuz u askin too many questions/
Ill change my mood from hard to harder so u can see tha inflection/
WACK
OVERALL
OBVIOUS FUCKIN BATTLE HERE.. CAPONE USE PUNCHES.
V/ FOFRENSYX
plz need more votes thnx
plz vote on my battles thnx
bumpin this up for 2-6 more votes. I know it's my sixth bump which is against rules, but who cares, Al broke that ages ago.
Forensyx
resurrected from the grave, ill reintroduce you to the cemetary
cuz ill fuck up this bitch like a texan vetinary
good opening
slice ya spleen, rip out ya bowel and stuff it down ya throat
cuz it's the only way your shit could make any emcee around ya choke
good punch
he's a joke, but the punchline's as funny as brain cancer
your disses couldnt turn heads if you doubled up as a breakdancer
another good punch
my words leave you speechelss, thers no way you could still rap on
regardless of ya name, in this battle when it comes to weak emcees I'LL (Al) cap one
iight but corny work on this
its a wrap son, body bag waiting for a casket
dead gansters are too late stopin not realising your past it
filler
now IVE got the tommy gun, you just left with tommy
play with his gun, find white stuff and Al's gotta ask mommy
nice punch ok multi
did puberty never hit? did i rip this bitch too young?
instead of dropping, did his balls pack up and move on?
funny line
like a limp dick slippin pets, you the weakest in do(da)minion
you either ejaculate small female grizzlies, or come with the 'bear mini mum'
great multi
so rapbattles, lets keep this slaughter between you and me
I want the front seats at this motherfucker's eulogy
ok closer
Al Capone
This mothafucka can't rap u need to cut your teeth/ (to learn something)
U can actually gain some experience from me/
not really
Ull be dead by tha knife ill cut u efficiently/
Rip ur retina lose ur vision so u can't see/
good punch
He doesn't rhyme yo u wastin my time/
His names forensic he fuckin solves crime/
filler not a punch
So what does this mean hes po-po, 5-0, another cop/
And this means i get out my fo-fo, M-16 and u get popped/
good metaphor
This mothafucka talkin bout my eulogy so ur sayin im great/
But i havent died yet but death in two hours is ur fate/
nope
This nigga will die at seven and his funeral is at eight/
Leave forensyx body dumped and noone who will locate/
not a punch
Like mortal kombat bitch i'll create fatalities/
But this aint a videogames son this is reality/
filler
Stop rappin and go take ur criminal justice class/
What i do is tha criminal injustice so kiss my ass/
filler
Everybody can tell u a cop cuz u askin too many questions/
Ill change my mood from hard to harder so u can see tha inflection/
stop wit the cop shit
forensyx won this. al capone u did iight but forensyx came harder in punches and multies.
v/forensyx
ok man need more votes to close battle finally
n some1 vote on this battle so it can be closed thnx alot
still askin for votes for this battle to be closed thnx ppl plz
resurrected from the grave, ill reintroduce you to the cemetary
cuz ill fuck up this bitch like a texan vetinary------OK NOT THAT HARD THO
slice ya spleen, rip out ya bowel and stuff it down ya throat
cuz it's the only way your shit could make any emcee around ya choke---NICE
he's a joke, but the punchline's as funny as brain cancer
your disses couldnt turn heads if you doubled up as a breakdancer---OK
my words leave you speechelss, thers no way you could still rap on
regardless of ya name, in this battle when it comes to weak emcees I'LL (Al) cap one------NOT REALLY GOOD
its a wrap son, body bag waiting for a casket
dead gansters are too late stopin not realising your past it---EHH
now IVE got the tommy gun, you just left with tommy
play with his gun, find white stuff and Al's gotta ask mommy---NO WAY!!
did puberty never hit? did i rip this bitch too young?
instead of dropping, did his balls pack up and move on?---NOT PERSONAL ENOUGH
like a limp dick slippin pets, you the weakest in do(da)minion
you either ejaculate small female grizzlies, or come with the 'bear mini mum'----EHH! OOOOO--K BAD WRDN
so rapbattles, lets keep this slaughter between you and me
I want the front seats at this motherfucker's eulogy----NICE ENDN
YOU HIT N MISS WITH ALOT OF YOUR LINES, SOME SEEMED A BIT FORCED,
NOT BAD THO, DECENT VERSE ALL AROUND, JUST WORK ON MORE
DIRECT PERSONAL PUNCHLINES, TOWARDS YOUR OPPONENT.........
WORK ON IT SOME HOMIE, YOU GOT DECENT STRUCTURE, JUST POLISH IT UP
__________________________________________________ ________________
This mothafucka can't rap u need to cut your teeth/ (to learn something)
U can actually gain some experience from me/ -----EHH! DONT GET IT
Ull be dead by tha knife ill cut u efficiently/
Rip ur retina lose ur vision so u can't see/----COULD BE BETTER WRD'D
He doesn't rhyme yo u wastin my time/
His names forensic he fuckin solves crime/----NOT A PUNCH
So what does this mean hes po-po, 5-0, another cop/
And this means i get out my fo-fo, M-16 and u get popped/----NO GUNS ON THE (WWW)
This mothafucka talkin bout my eulogy so ur sayin im great/
But i havent died yet but death in two hours is ur fate/---NICE
This nigga will die at seven and his funeral is at eight/
Leave forensyx body dumped and noone who will locate/---OK
Like mortal kombat bitch i'll create fatalities/
But this aint a videogames son this is reality/---EHH! ADD MORE,ITS LIKE A 1/2 PUNCH
Stop rappin and go take ur criminal justice class/
What i do is tha criminal injustice so kiss my ass/---EHH! SLIM
Everybody can tell u a cop cuz u askin too many questions/
Ill change my mood from hard to harder so u can see tha inflection/----OK
THIS WAS A DECENT BATTLE OVERALL
DIFFERENT RHYME STYLES.......
BUT AL'S VERSE I THINK WAS A LITTLE BIT BETTER JUST B/C I FELT HE CAME MORE PERSONAL W/ HIS LINES......
DIDNT SEEM THAT FORCED, BUT SOME LINES, WERE PLAYED, OR RECYCLED,
TRY TO USE YOUR WORDS W/ CREATIVITY..........YOU GOT IT HOMIE
MY V/------------------AL CAPOPNE
BETTER VERSE OVERALL
BETTER DELIVERY
STRUCTURE
MORE DIRECT PERSONALS.........
V/Forensyx cuz Al capone jus didnt come hard enough.