jeez why cant this battle get votes?
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jeez why cant this battle get votes?
OHIO in the muhfuckin building.....
Reality.....first line was smoove.....the feel the breeze line was smoove......ganksta...the E line was nasty boy im tellin you.....thats about all that i REALLY enjoyed...eveything else was smoove....but those stood out
Killa E.....what the fuck happened to yo verse? structure was off like a bitch....and i mena like a bitch...you attempted to do multis....didnt succeed.....try harder next tyme...
vote....Reality
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god damn it.. how the hell was that vote inadequate.. well uppin again *sighs*
vote reality because he had way more punches that made sence his structure was pretty good and he came with a lot of disses to win overall reality 7/10 and the other dude 4/10 im out but yall need to check out my newset battle and vote im out
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Reality - You had some good concepts and some played concepts, but good job in the creativity department. You just need work on your wording to make your punches hit more directly. Like the gas line..okay, I get it, but could have been worded much better so you didn't have to explain it. The punchlines thing is obvious but surprisingly I've never seen it before so good job there. Overall aight verse.
Killa - From the moment I read your opener I knew you were doomed. Why is his mom having you as a baby? How is that an insult? Don't use gay jokes, mama jokes, or sex jokes, they're all played and ineffective. All you basically did the whole verse was use self-glorification and talking about how your a pimp... that doesn't insult him either. Throw insults to win battles, your shit doesn't fly.
Vote - Reality
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REality:Some clever lines(cause all your "forced drops" will never ~amount to shit~)
but your flow and structure is horrible..here's some advice, count syllables..nothing in your verse stood out and your attmept at a personal was weak, you could've done alot more with your verse but truly it was flat..
Killa:You need to actually stretch your lines, because your verse was wack..1 perosnal isn't good enough, too many played preschool lines and filler that just didn't hit hard..work on your wordplay and vocab and don't try wack lines like these especially when closing out a battle..
then ull be wishin why did i face him/
Son im tha boss like if i were thug slim/
vote: Reality..both of you need to expand your vocab and increase personals..this battle was filled with punches that just weren't needed and weak structure.
damn shame.. uppin for more votes
jeez close this fuckin battle for christ sake
Battle Not Too Good... None The Less Still Deserves A Vote...
Both Emcees Coulda Came Harder But I Feel That Reality Step Up In This Battle... Killa's Rhymes Where Too Simple
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still not closed yet
someone close this battle
close this bitches god man
up all it takes is one more vote im sick of having to up this bullshit
vote
uppin for the last vote in this piece