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here i go
gonna let this shit flow
haha nice, NOT
like the bullet out of my gun u might wanna run yo
u gonna hit the groud liek a bag of bricks
or liek yo boyfriend mushroom slapped u with his dick
wtf???
dont vote KALIKO he anit got no flow
and his lines are only gonna be so-so
uhh so-so... shit
i be swinging "punches" like master j*
sept my lines make his look gay
baddd
i the exacutioner and u gonna die today
u best be steppen messing with me that way
gonna tie bricks to yo fet and throw u in da bay
i make yo girl say hey rubbing my dick in her face she be getting freaka
hear dis this b the last line in my spit i end it with sumthing that'll make u shit
KALIKO u gay u lost yo way like a immigrant i hope u ant here to stay-
best be n yo fucking way
ok i cant finish analyzing ur verse line from, its so messed up. next time when u battle try actually thinking of some good punches, ur verse was weeak and was boring. ur structure and flow was horrible too and u were creative about it. a lot of shit was played i give u a 3/10 , the three is for at least sayin something.
You just another e-thug. Listen to G-Unit then post ya verse.
Bitch, you couldn't "pop heat" without plugging in a toaster first
haha nice opening
executiioner 'sposed to burst - You bleach money?? Cuz you got 'light cash
You bite ass - losing a race is how you "might last(get it??)
ha good
You write trash. How you gon hurt me - you ain't lern how to diss.
But bitch I'll "do you so dirty" it'll "burn when I piss"
ok
I'm like "Sherlock Homey", - I'm peepin the proof.
ya line's'll neva be straight, if ya even tha noose
ok
You really iller than kali Nah - you just thought so.
When I K.O. you, don't hate me - hate your off-flow.
ok ok
Hate your long lines. Get mad and hate your weak verses.
While my style kill you so evil - your Pastor will speak curses
good
I'm the best with this - Posessed by the fuckin excorcist
I'm like your boyfriends dick, how often I "wreck your shit"
ok good
Me and the voters all laughing - but we good now.
CUZ I SAID COME GANGSTA & YOU PULLED YA HOOD DOWN...
ohhhh nice nice
ur last line killed his whole verse. ur punchs were strong not weak, and they did stand out. u had a lot better of a flow and structure as well. i can tell u thew some multis in there good job, the last line was my fav. nice job "battlin" and this was one sided. overall 8/10
v/kali
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ur verse was not good u didnt rhyme in some lines ur lines were short no flow no vocab i really wasnt feeling yo shit man elevate furst then battle yo not 2 be rude but work on yo rap game u need to have a good flow have some good rhymes have 4 decent punches in a battle and have word structure and vocab choices read a dictionary bu i liked that u tried and u had some sort of knowledge in rappin but need to work on ur game yo overall rate-1.0/10
kali-
ur verse was off da chain had flow and punches but needed word structure and
needed some delivery to those punches but did good really liked those punches especially You just another e-thug. Listen to G-Unit then post ya verse.
Bitch, you couldn't "pop heat" without plugging in a toaster first hot opener so keep ur game goin strong and ull elevate in tha rap game overall rate7.5/10
v/kali cuz he brought everything to this verse and that opener made me want to read more and more and tha otha nigga didnt bring his A game need to work on that and kali did good nice lines that packed punch that's why he got my vote
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KALIKOZE911 killed this guy.....KALIKOZE911 had good punches , flow, and nice vocab..
"Bitch, you couldn't "pop heat" without plugging in a toaster first "
"You bite ass - losing a race is how you "might last(get it??) "
those were the 2 line i thought stood out the most....
exacutioner got to work on his game...got aint got no punches......you just said you did.........aint no self-explanatory like T.I. up in this bitch...you got to prove yoself..with youe skills
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You just another e-thug. Listen to G-Unit then post ya verse.
Bitch, you couldn't "pop heat" without plugging in a toaster first
executiioner 'sposed to burst - You bleach money?? Cuz you got 'light cash
You bite ass - losing a race is how you "might last(get it??)
kalikoze got this battle easily executioner.. u need to elevate badly fam... ur shit is to simple... i suggest u hit up Help Area, and get some tips on battling, not to down you or nething im just tryna be fair n help u out....
vote - kali
