KALIKOZE911 if i could vote you'd have it you have awsome structure and great punches keep up the good work
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KALIKOZE911 if i could vote you'd have it you have awsome structure and great punches keep up the good work
well this was a pretty good battle, and from votes it loks like it as well, or we just got dickriders......anyway
Kalik....
u had a pretty nice verse some times it was better then others, but a lot of times it is like that, hard to come through on hard punches every battle everyline but o well, u had a pretty good flow goin, and u had nice punches here and there, work on personals a little bit more and get more creative with ur style aiight man
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Young Cell....
i have seen u do better peeping some of ur other battles, u kind of confuse me every now and then some times u come hard and iight then sometimes u spit just wack, but anyway u had an ok flow, and stuff but ur punches were just not there, they were just lil nudges or some shit nothin really connected from my eyes, some lines were ok though liked a couple but other then that work on ya shit man
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v/ kalik
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Kaliko- Ya whole verse was well done. I like the punches but some of them were a lil bit forced. Nice wordplay, metas, multies(i like) and the consistency was good. Overall you did well on this battle, but i seen a lil bit better of you. Keep this shit going and also werk on ya structure...it was a lil hard to read.
Young Cell- You a young'n and needs to elevate dawg. Your whole verse was shit, mayb a lil somethin but nothyn compared to Kal. Just need to work everything you need. Improve on this shit and you alright. You had some nice flow though..i'll give u that...good shit thought...elevate
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^^^^this was my first battle on this site but look at my others tell me if i got better
nice battle cell
u ripped it up out dere
if i had 100 votes mine wud go 2 u cell
wen i get 100 i will breakdown da battle n vote 4 u
my vote- cell
ay yo hit up da link!
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Originally Posted by b rabbit
yo i apprciate the compliment.......
drop linz will return the fav:
good lookn, chk out more battles........
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=176857
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=176588
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=176852
young Cell" quick wit his 'chicken dances', dunn posted so this 'cock-advances' & still no chances...
I break stances, this 'so-sad' cuz this FAGGIT had to 'breakdown' & battle death, I BATTLE wit glances...
His pants is 'wet' like 'school-nerds', who wanna do 'homework', on this FAGGIT? Cus 'Young Cell' is just 'CLASS_less'...
Ya verse is 'Bull', 'Young Cell' is so 'WACK' he bring down 'PROPERTY VALUE ON WEB-BOARDS'...
Your 'Artificial' when it comes to 'character', I'm surprised you even gone 'SPIT' using ya 'OWN' vocal chords...
I'm 'Original' wit words, a lyrical scientist paving the way 'BITCH',
manufacturing 'BATTLE STYLE' inuendo's...
Like 'Nintendo's' you 'PLAY'd-OUT' "PEON", you dont 'punch', they all scratches, like 'DEFENSELESS-hoes'...
had to 'run-quick', to get ya freepostings up for 'RESPECT', cuz real flow in you is really hard 2 'FIND'
I spit on 'time', 'Young Cell' be fishing in 'water's without FISH' cuz all over this board, you 'DRAGG'N-YA-DEAD-LINES'...
You'll 'feel the need' to spit hard on 'PROMINENT people' becuz You'll never be 'one', already fail'd so ima call you my 'G-son'...
Take a 'free-run' among the only one who will 'out-freestyle' your 'PRE-WRITES' & father your 'PITIFUL-ways'...
Another 'Group-E', rap 'pussy*' without 'creativity'. I spit 'bullets' that leave 'YOU' seeing more 'SHELLS' than 'OCEAN-WAVES'...
Nothing saves you against me, cuz CREWS, FRIENDS, ALIASES, can only do so much to help this 'LIL-CHILD'...
Try'na 'buy-time' with me to write ya 'PLAYED_OUT' verse, while U kow I got the 'competance' 4 a straight 'FREESTYLE'...
I could 'hold-up signs' & let you 'combine-MINDS' with cats here, you'd still have 'SHITTY' rhymes...
I'll put ya 'BRAIN' on 'verbal-lockdown', imprison' ya lost soul, & have ya 'WHOLE' unwitty STYLE 'doin-time'...
WHO'S NEXT-2-GET-RECYCLED........
REALI REALI REALI NICE SHIT A GOOD FLOW
Damn this guy rushed me, wow I dump them 3’s
this is a peace of cake, but with the KALI this lame stunt wit G
right… to much bull shit like you come for me
you pussy, it’s just that time of month to bleed//
i stunt for free, and you know I hold the weapon
i’m suggestin that you testing this, you learn’n the lessons
step into the lessons of perfectionist
this kid devilish notice his flow is still effortless
killen this foe and turning heads like the exorcist//
my rhymes shine like a bezel or two
clap medal your threw, ill Hansel and griddle you crew
you wack, remind me of game but im not settle’n dudes
the point is im a head of my time….an lame I been better then you//
really you multi’s suck, to battle is more to style
he’s like you is sick…naw really I think the boy is wild
im sonnin you man you know the boy is foul
im killin you silent…so why would anyone want the 40KAL//
Yo a nice verses but not al der!!!SOZ MAN
V/KALIKOZE911