seeing as a decent amount of people were feelin this..
ima give it one more up..........
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seeing as a decent amount of people were feelin this..
ima give it one more up..........
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Originally Posted by JaakDaPhake
It's writing like this that proves that rap isn't just bullshit about smacking hoes and smoking grass.
^^^Agrees....It's fine to once in a while write a verse about smacking a hoe or stealing a nigga chain but you have to be versatile as well and be able to talk about different things. Definetly a good drop....nice flow, great use of metaphors and good vocab...Keep it up....
That flowed well.. Good emotion in the piece, you showed like this wasnt your first drop you ever did. Good job man. Multies and flow was great, and you had a good structure going. Keep up the good work. I give it a 9.2/10 Good job, and keep droppin.
This was nice. It was a smooth read. Good rhymescheme and everything. Keep up the good work.