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Aight..
Kinda one-sided IMO..
And1 - your structure was really hurting..very stretched bars man, gotta fix that immediately, you'll get hits for that like a motherfucker. Because of the messed up structure, the flow was hurting too. Not too bad on the creativity side, liked some of your punches. Personals werent really there, or didnt hit very well..For structure, tryin keep it like:
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...and so on..ya know? Keep elevating man..
hardhitter - overall, I think you came harder in this one. Personals were a little better, and punches were..eh...ok. Ditto on the structure and flow, need to work on that badly. Very stretched bars. However, yours was a little easier to read and you came harder than and1..in my opinion anyways. You both need to work on it tho..
Vote / hardhitter
Peace..
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your verses are really similar. lol. nice tho. came real original. your structures were outta wack. both had real nice punches and wordplay tho. didn't come to much on the personals. kinda annoying to read wit those structures, but i think you both came pretty hard. but overall, i was feelin' and1's verse more. he came with nice multies that mixed well wit his verse and made his flow smoother and nice. props to both but for flow...
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peace
