Putting this past the people I don't like :p
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Putting this past the people I don't like :p
This was cool. I've read about 4 or 5 of your drops, and I like the others more. This is still above average. The flow was ok, for the most part. Vocab and rhyme scheme were cool. It was a decent read.
Edit:...And why did you censor yourself (like saying "Shi*" instead of "Shit").