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OK, Ve0m... that verse was utter garbage. Please elevate. Nuf said
Yte - you basically nailed this one... every line was true and hit, though you could of course improve (anyone can) on your punches and personals... all around kicked his ass though. You should go to the new crew forums and try out for my crew... you got potential.
pz......
upping for vote #5...........................................
Ight,
Venoms Broke his ish down quick, Descent punches, some of them couldve been worded a lil bit better, some were played but u show some what signs of elevation since yer last battle,Flow, Yeh u kept it on track nothing really special ,tie ,
Personals were ok, Tounge twisted shit Was prolly the best line outa the whole battle... Structure, You need to work on yer structure dog, Use Punctuation so people can understnad and/or read easier.........
Yte Grl Came way to basic, no real punches, None that atleast hit hard.Sept for maybe his closer, that one 1 line shit was more directed towards him then any of the personals he got at u wit...Flow, U kept it solid on track, again nuttin real special, structure, Yer structure was a wee bit better than venoms, Wordplay- Youve proved to have a bigger vocab and used a hell of alot more creativity then in yer wordplay thenm venoms used in his.......
All in all, Venoms punches were some what more humerous, but yte was cleaner scripted , better structured,Both had ok personals but I feel again that venoms were just more humerous...EVen tho that "1 Line" Line Yte Had Was nice, Venom kept the punches coming At a better pace,
Good battle keep elvating
my vote(Hate to say it)But/ venoms
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